Fall For Five

Well now that I kinda know what direction ( lol ) I want to go in with my story I thought I should write a little review on what new readers will read in this story =D
Falling for Five is a story about a young girl named Lilly Davis an 18 year old american girl who has only ever wanted one thing, when her parents gives her the gift of a life time she goes out on an adventure to start a life on her own.
Hopefully that makes you want to read my story if not just give me a chance and read it anyway and maybe leave me a comment telling me what you did or didn't like about it, also leave me the name of a story you want me to read.


3. The Last Day

I hoped you liked my first chapter I know it was short but I seriously don't know what I'm really gonna start writing about anyway so I'm just coming up with this as I go so if you dont like it or like it, please leave a comment for me to read cause I don't wanna keep writing if no one likes it so yeah but other than that thanks to everyone that has read and commented so far xx ~ Maria

       Lilly's P.O.V

"Lilly wake up!" I hear my mom yell from downstairs. My eyes popped open as I jump off my bed, stretch, and yawn. As faight foot steps appraoch my rooms door I see my mom. "what are you smiling for?" she askes I thought well for one reason schools over and I dont have to see the school I've hated for about two years now till the end of summer  "oh im just happy summer's finially here." I replyed "well thats good but dont waste all your happiness because of summer cause me and your dad have a surprise for you when you come home from school today" I was a bit confused at first but just went alone with what she had said and got ready for school.


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