Fall For Five

Well now that I kinda know what direction ( lol ) I want to go in with my story I thought I should write a little review on what new readers will read in this story =D
Falling for Five is a story about a young girl named Lilly Davis an 18 year old american girl who has only ever wanted one thing, when her parents gives her the gift of a life time she goes out on an adventure to start a life on her own.
Hopefully that makes you want to read my story if not just give me a chance and read it anyway and maybe leave me a comment telling me what you did or didn't like about it, also leave me the name of a story you want me to read.


11. The Arrival

Lilly's P.O.V

About an hour later the doorbell rang, I was on the couch watching T.V.. I got up and answered the door my mom busted throught the door ,screamed hi ,and ran straight into our downstairs bathroom holding some bags leaving me to talk to my dad. "Hi Lilly do how was your last day, Are you ready for summer break?" he said sounding excited "umm school was fine (lie) and yes I'm so ready for summer can't wait to just have nonstop days of just hanging out and relaxation" I said .He smiled "so dad why did mom just run into the bathroom like that?" "well ever since I picked her up from work she needed to go and when we were at the store the bathroom's were out of order" "oh okay" I said smiling. Just then my mom came out the bathroom with a cute teddy bear and a sparkly box. "Honey" "yes?" my dad asked "you left the food in the car," "oh right , sorry I'll be right back" he said as he walked out to the car. Seconds later he came in with a box of pizza in his hands. "ooooo, pizza I'm starved!" I shout he set down the pizza box on the kitchen table then opened it. I took a worm slice off the cardboard box and shoved a piece in my mouth then chewed my mom smiled at me then there was an akward silence. My mom broke it "So Luke ( my dad ) should we tell her now cause I can't wait any longer?" she said "me neither" he agreed.

Author's Note : hey everyone this chapter was okay to me leave me a comment or kik me if you want on what you think the next chapter will be "The Surprise" the title speaks for itself and im tired but I'm posting it cause I've made you wait long enough to know so yeah love you all keep reading thx for all the likes, favorites and readers so far if you wanna kik me my user name is Official_mia14_
Alright love you all and bye xx~Maria
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