Fall For Five

Well now that I kinda know what direction ( lol ) I want to go in with my story I thought I should write a little review on what new readers will read in this story =D
Falling for Five is a story about a young girl named Lilly Davis an 18 year old american girl who has only ever wanted one thing, when her parents gives her the gift of a life time she goes out on an adventure to start a life on her own.
Hopefully that makes you want to read my story if not just give me a chance and read it anyway and maybe leave me a comment telling me what you did or didn't like about it, also leave me the name of a story you want me to read.


8. She's so GONE !

Lilly"s P.O.V

"Sorry I didn't see you I left something and came back to get it" he said "yeah I know you never see me you act like I'm never there" I say in a low voice that he still was able to hear "WHAT? I always try to talk to you, you just never let me!" he answered "maybe that's because you knew I've liked you since 8th grade but ever since you started dating Megan you made fun of me and broke my heart right in front of Megan to look cool you've known i liked you Forever you just fel like hurting me and walking away Jake!" tears where streaming down my face that was exactly the reason I stopped talking to him since that day because I've been holding back tears that would explode out of me at any moment if I would have talked to him. "Jake you make me feel mad,sad,happy,and excited all in two seconds what's what I hate most about you and you know that too, you just don't care about me , your the "popular" football player with the stupid "popular" cheerleader girlfriend and being seen with me is the last thing you would want," he just stands there not saying anything, not moving. I get frustrated off my face. Then all of a sudden he grabs my wrist and pulls me into a kiss. The only thing I've wanted him to do was kiss me since I met him and now that he has Iwas mad at him because it took so long for him to noticed the person that really loved him was right in front of him the whole time. I pulled away angrily and ran back to my locker, grabbed my bag and left him running after me. "STOP, I love you. why are you running away from me now?" he shouted " Because if you really loved me you would have kissed me a long time ago, you only love me when no body's around to make fun of you. IM LEAVING!" I say and with that for the first time ever I saw Jake cry. This time I just felt pain to know that he really did love me back, but if he cared less about being the popular football player he could have been with someone he actually has feelings for and that someone who HAD feelings for him too. But it's too late cause now she's so gone.



Hey everyone I hoped you like this chapter hopfully it's not confusing and the title of this chapter came to me because I randomly started thinking of that disney movie lemonade mouth and the song the girl sings to the guy she just broke up with is She's so gone, so it just fit pretty well with the chapter and if you want you can youtube the song if you never saw the movie lemonade mouth.~Mariaxx<3

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