Fall For Five

Well now that I kinda know what direction ( lol ) I want to go in with my story I thought I should write a little review on what new readers will read in this story =D
Falling for Five is a story about a young girl named Lilly Davis an 18 year old american girl who has only ever wanted one thing, when her parents gives her the gift of a life time she goes out on an adventure to start a life on her own.
Hopefully that makes you want to read my story if not just give me a chance and read it anyway and maybe leave me a comment telling me what you did or didn't like about it, also leave me the name of a story you want me to read.


4. New Girl Crush

Lilly's P.O.V

 As I got ready for school I thought about what the surprise could be. Then I worried about what my only friend Emma would say ,but I remembered that she was barely friends anymore since she was taken away from me by the "popular" girls in school which brings me too one reason why I hate my school. 

 Just then I had a flashback of my first day at Pepperidge Middle School in 8th grade I was the new girl. I walked up to the school and held out my schedule in front of my face. My eyes caught the words  Homeroom 220. I saw some stairs and walked up to them when I was just about to look up from my schedule I bumped into the cutest guy i've seen since I walked into the school. "oh my god,i'm so sorry!" I say. He laughted a little "it's fine" he said as he bent down to pick my books up off the floor. I looked down to reach for the books in his hands but stood there in shock as I meet his goergous blue eyes, after about 40 seconds I look down at my books and he places them in my hand. I get up say sorry once again then say thank you and as I  away I hear sweetest quiet "your welcome" and smile as I open the doors that lead to the hallway.

author's note:

alright hope you liked this chapter once again please leave me a comment saying whatever you want me to know and i will answer you back also tell me if i should keep going....

p.s just so you know if your wondering some of this chapter is true and some made up. ~Maria xx

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