Fall For Five

Well now that I kinda know what direction ( lol ) I want to go in with my story I thought I should write a little review on what new readers will read in this story =D
Falling for Five is a story about a young girl named Lilly Davis an 18 year old american girl who has only ever wanted one thing, when her parents gives her the gift of a life time she goes out on an adventure to start a life on her own.
Hopefully that makes you want to read my story if not just give me a chance and read it anyway and maybe leave me a comment telling me what you did or didn't like about it, also leave me the name of a story you want me to read.


5. Falling a bit too hard

Lilly's P.O.V

By the time I found my homeroom there was only a minute left so the teacher just told me to wait for the bell to ring so I could leave. As the bell rang for our next class I rushed to get out first just so I could find a teacher that could tell me where my next class was. I found my first class accident but I didnt care I ran in and sat all the way in the back cause even though I found the class by myself I was still late to another class, so of course i got a bunch of people staring at me like I was an alien. I guess the teachers didnt really care cause they never told me anything. When I found a seat in the back of the room I saw a familiar face and those gorgeous blue eyes came back into my memory. That boy I bumped into this morning was in my first class I didnt say anything to him but he waved at me and laughed when I sat down. I started to blush and looked into my bag for my books. At the end of the class I started to waalk towards the door on my way to look for the social studies room but I was stopped when someone tapped my back. "Hey I'm sorry about this morning I never told you my name I just let you leave, my names Jake Reese"he smiled I looked down then up again into his eyes "Hi Jake I'm Lilly Davis" god how his eyes made me wanna melt. "So Lilly where's your next class?"he asked "umm truthfuly I really don"t know how to read this schedule it's kinda confusing." I replyed. He smiled at me and grabbed my books and my schedule in one hand and my hand in his other hand then said "I have the same classes as you so i'll just have to walk you to everyone of them, social studies and science are downstairs" we walked down some stairs and around some corners I was lost but I didn't care I think I was falling a bit too hard for a guy I just met but do you know that feeling you have when you like a guy so much and he makes you feel special for a split second then one day he just acts like nothing ever happened because he became the "popular" guy on the football team? well thats exactly what happened to me and Jake and ever since then we drifted apart.



Hey everyone I hope you liked this chapter I'm definitely going to be putting more up in the next couple of minutes becaus I know I've been behind on my chapters since I started and its just cause this last month has really sucked considering that the state that I live in was under hurricane watch then that hurricane which was sandy hit new jersey where I live really hard so we lost power for about three weeks. I'm fine but im just sad about all the peole who have no homes at the moment. Then if that wasn't bad enough we got a snow storm which after we all got light again we lost so like last friday I finally got it back and I was super happy but this wednesday I got my tonsils removed and I was in pain for a couple days so today was finaly the day I could really write and type because I felt really bad that everyone kept asking me to post but I had so much going on I couldn't. So yeah I really hope you guys understand cause I know I'm just talking and talking but I really  just needed you guys to know what was going on.

P.S - oh before I post I just want you to know that if you don't think the next three chapters are good it's cause I was writing them this morning even though I was half asleep cause I never got to write them when all that other stuff was happening please leave comments telling me what you think and if there is anything I can do to make it better. thanks :D ~Mariaxx

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