Across the ocean

Taylor, Elizabeth, and Hailey are 3 normal 18 year old girls, or so they thought. They get a chance to go to London for school. They all are major One Direction fans and never thought they would ever meet them until there amazing flight to London!
This is my first fan fiction and I would love to hear your advice and comments. There is a little bit of a love story and has some comedy. So please tell me what you think :)


9. First REAL kiss

Hailey's POV

     The week flew by. It was Saturday before I knew it and I was searching for something to wear I didn't have much because of the cost to fly bags over here but I did have some fancy skirts and shirts. After a while of trying on different skirt and shirt combinations I settled for a tight purple skirt with a sequined, silver top. I added a light amount of make up and put my hair into a pony tail with 2 small pieces hanging out that I curled. I put on silver earrings and a neckless that was shaped like a bow and it was a light blue. Taylor said that the neckless makes my eyes standout that's why I wore it I knew for my past one direction searches that Louis was a killer for eyes!


     I walked out of the room and went to the elevator to take me down. I started to think about if I over dressed but then I remembered Louis text from earlier that day and it said "wear something nice because we are doing something else along with the movie." at that moment all the thoughts of being to dressed up left my mind and new thoughts about where we were going came in... The elevator doors opened to the lobby and there stood Louis he was wearing a blue and white striped shirt with nice jeans and a blazer. I figured the blazer was Harry's because I recognized it from the pictures I had on my iPhone of the guys. He said to me "shall we?" and he held out his arm and we walked to the limo he had rented for us and that made me wonder ever more where we were going!

Louis POV

     She came out of the elevator. She was beautiful she was wearing a tight skirt and a sequined shirt with a neckless that made her eyes stand out. Her hair was not perfect, and it looked stunning! I had the best and most romantic place in mind for this date I was sure she was going to love it!

Hailey's POV

    It was 5 o'clock and we went to the movie theaters we saw the movie Ghost Busters. They put it back in the theaters So they could have a good older movie to transform into 3D. It was amazing. I saw it before but never in 3D. We walked back to the limo and Louis whispered to the driver the location I was trying as hard as I could to hear what he said but i could hear nothing. As Louis sat back down he put the blinds in the window down and said "don't want you to peak!" " now why would I do that" I said to him " because you look like the type of person who when ever you can't know something you have to know it!" "yeah that's pretty much me" I said to him. "thought so!"

     After that we sat in silence for a few minutes until I asked him "are we there yet?" He said "almost, love" I began to get impatient I wanted to know where we were going so bad. Then the car stopped my heart skipped a beat when I got out. All I saw was a tiny pavilion with roses and white Christmas tree lights everywhere. It was breath taking. in the center of the small, white pavilion was a table for 2 with a candle in the middle. Louis pulled my chair out for me. I sat down, then a lady with a black dress and long wind blown hair came over to us handing me my menu and Louis his. I thanked her as she walked a way so quietly it was almost impossible to hear her shoes on the pavilion steps. I looked at the menu and saw some delicious foods, but decided to just order spaghetti. The young women was back and asked us what we wanted to eat we both spoke at the same time and we both said spaghetti. I laughed slightly but was cut off by a flute and a violin playing softly in the back-round. It was perfect once we were done eating the table and chairs were moved away by two men in waiter outfits. The music grew a little louder as me and Louis started to dance in the moon light. I felt like there were butterfly's flying inside of me, But they were the good kind. Then I started to lean closer to him, he quickly caught on and started to kiss me, his lips fit mine perfectly I started to kiss him back when he stopped and said to me standing with our foreheads touching "i am really happy you came tonight." I started to talk but was cut off by his lips reconnecting to mine and this kiss was short but passionate. We pulled away and headed back towards the limo, and drove back to the hotel.

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