Across the ocean

Taylor, Elizabeth, and Hailey are 3 normal 18 year old girls, or so they thought. They get a chance to go to London for school. They all are major One Direction fans and never thought they would ever meet them until there amazing flight to London!
This is my first fan fiction and I would love to hear your advice and comments. There is a little bit of a love story and has some comedy. So please tell me what you think :)

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17. Does she trust me!?

Louis POV

     it was Monday morning and Hailey texted me saying that they had had school today! I was disappointed because I wanted to spend the day with her. But me and the boys talked and we had an idea!

-----after school---

Hailey's POV

     Elizabeth said " ugh that was the most confusing and boring day of school ever!" "I know right! I got lost about twice and missed 3 classes because of it!" I said. "Yeah well now we can talk about anything not school related!"Taylor said. "Okay then how about we play this game that my brother made up, it's pretty stupid but it has nothing to do with school!" I said excitedly. "Sure!" "Okay well what you do is someone says a topic and you have to talk about that subject in 2 sentences, but there's a twist we each have to wright down an emotion and put it in the center when it's your turn you take a piece of paper and say your two sentences in that emotion." "Okay, sounds fun lets play!" "Okay Taylor you want to make up a subject." "Yeah sure," Taylor said "how about umm... Worst boyfriend you have had in the past." "Okay well I will go first." I picked up a card and it said "sad" "Okay well lets see I dated a guy named Ben and he was rude, didn't listen, and I thought he was cheating on me. Later I found out he was!" "Wow" Taylor said "that's interesting!" Elizabeth "sorry to stop this game and all but I have to go Harry texted me and wants to meet at the park." "Oh lala!" Taylor said Elizabeth smiled and said "stop! and I got to go." "Okay bye!" She walked out and me and Taylor continued the game.

Louis POV

     I looked at my watch and said the girls should be home by now so I decided to go over to surprise them. When I got to there dorm I heard them talking so before I knocked I decided to listen a little. I herd Hailey talking she said something about him being rude, and someone cheating on her. I could not hear the hole conversation. But it sounded like she thought I was cheating on her. I was not sure, but the thought of it was heart breaking. So Hailey didn't trust me. Those 4 words kept going through my mind "Hailey didn't trust me, Hailey didn't trust me." I started to cry and with out listening to anymore, I ran home with tears running down my face. Authors Note: Hey everyone because this is my first fan fiction I'm not sure if you guys like it or if its good. I would love to hear your thoughts and comments about this story Also I'm trying to update as soon as I can but its really hard to think of ideas of what should happen next.

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