Not how things planned out (apart of me was missing part 2) - (finished)

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  • Published: 13 Oct 2012
  • Updated: 23 Dec 2012
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this is the sequel to apart of me was missing, so if you haven't read it go read it before you read this if you want the story to make sense, unless you want to view this first, it that's case continue, Will Jay tell Laura who she really is? Will their be secret revealed? Will their be new life involved? well read on to find out :) thanks to everyone who read the first movella I hope you like this as much as you liked the other one :)

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45. hurraayyyy

Niall's point of view

after an hour of driving around we finally got to the pace called Hindley "someone ring Laura see where she is, oh my word I cant wait to see her" Louis said "ok I will, and same were so close " Harry volunteered " ok Harold call that number" Louis joked, we all laughed "so go on Harry" I said, "ok im doing it now" he replied, so he got out his phone, dialled the number and put it to his ear, "Laura, hello......where are you, where in Hindley now" with that he paused for a bit "guys she's near a mac Donalds and an asda, Louis do you know where they are" Harry asked "yea I do tell her we'll be about 15 minutes" "did you hear that.... yeah......yea we cant either were so close....we love you to.......yeah 15 minutes alright....ok,....bye" Harry said and with that he put the phone down, "come on Lou hurry" Liam said "alright"

we continued the journey "once we get Laura can we go get a mac Donalds im hungry is anyone else" I asked as my stomach rumbled "yeah come to think of it I am" Zayn said "yea same" Harry and Liam said in unison  " so that's settled then, we'll get Laura and then go for a mac Donalds" Louis said, everyone cheered and clapped "the one that I came with, she had to go, but you look amazing standing alone" Zayn started "so cmon cmon move a little closer now, cmon cmon, aint no way your walking out, cmon cmon show me what your all about, yeaaahh, ive been watching you all night, theres something in your eyes, saying cmon cmon and dance with me baby, yeahhh, the music is so loud, I wanna be yours now, so, cmon cmon and dance with me baby" we all sang, we started dancing and singing within 15 minutes we arrived at the macdonalds near asda

so we drove round looking for Laura, "why don't we try in asda" Liam suggested "good idea Liam" we all said, so Louis parked the car on the asda car park and we went in, we looked everywhere in every aisle, we asked the workers at asda, the people at the checkout, nothing, we got a few people stare at us, we got girls come upto us asking for pictures and autographs, we spent an hour looking in asda, and we was just about to give up then a girl caught my eye, "guys over there" I yelled pointing towards the main entrance.

she was just standing there waiting, freezing, she had a real short sleeved t shirt on and shorts, and obviously shoes but no coat her arms and legs seemed like they were going blue"oh my its Laura, its really Laura" Zayn yelled, "has anyone got a blanket" I asked, "no but we could buy one" there, there next to us" Harry pointed, "oh yeah. and look what they are of, us" Louis said, we all laughed, so we got it and went to the self service bit which was next to us to, we payed and we walked towards her, we all creeped up behind her and then Louis held the blanket wide and then wrapped it around her, she screamed at first and then swung one of her arms which had a bag in it around and hit Louis on the head with it, "ow, that hurt what was that for" he laughed while rubbing his head.

she then turned around and then noticed who it was "Louis" she shouted "Im so so so sorry  and im so so so glad to see you all" She yelled "its fine im sorry for scaring you" Louis said apologetically, she then ran to him and wrapped her arms round and ave him a big hug, after a minute she let go and the turned to us "Harry, Liam, Niall and Zayn, I cant believe its you" she yelled she an upto us all and one by one she hugged us, "come lets get you in the car, keep that blanket round you, you must be freezing" Liam said smiling "yes Im freezing and ok" Laura replied, so we all walked back to the car.

"hurraaayyyyy" we all yelled in unison before we got in the car, "theres not enough room in the car for 6 of us, let Laura sit on her own, she needs to keep warm" Liam said, "one of you dudes can sit on my knee if you want" Zayn offered "I will" I offered "alright" he replied, so we all got in the car, Harry was at the front, Liam was on the right side of the car, I was in the middle and Laura was on the left side, Louis put the heater on fully and we made sure Laura was wrapped up tightly in the blanket, "thank you" she said "thank you so much, you guys are the best, no - one has ever done something this nice to me, thank you" and with that she started sobbing "no problem and aww dont cry, your part of our family now, we love you, and we know you would have done the same for us, so it was our pleasure to have done this for you, you needed saving and your our family and we wont let anyone hurt you again we promise" I said as I wiped her tears away from her eyed, she buried her head in my neck and I hugged her, "thank you, and by the way, I phoned the police earlier and told them where Julie and Jamie were, an hour after they rang me back up and told me that they had found them and their in jail now" Laura announced, "hurrayyyy" we all shouted in unison.

the movella is nearly finished now, thank you to all of the people that has took the time to read all of this, thank you, im so grateful  if i get enough people, I may consider doing another movella, I  dont know what about yet but if people has liked this and does want me to write another movella after this I will, but only if there enough people that say they want me to, and thank you to all of you again, you really are nice people :)

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