Burning Sun ( twilight)

Burning sun is a story based off the twilight saga. Burning sun has several mini chapters following closely to the story line's however adding more detail than beloved stephenie mayers wrote, just enough to keep you hooked. There are new scenerio's added but in such a way you'd truly thought it was written into the actual book. Burning sun has some of Bella's point of view but mostly edward's. Like midnight sun ( steph's partial release of edward's point of view). Help satisfy your craving to get inside the handsome vampires mind and hear of the constant struggles with himself and the decisions he's made along with his deep feelings for human Bella.


16. The waters Edge ( Edward's p.o.v)

   I sat on the ledge of the rock overlooking the town below admiring the streams of light that blanketed the ground below. The night was peaceful, a slight breeze blew through my hair as I was engaged deep in thought. To have to hold back, was always a great sacrifice. But there was never a sacrifice I would not make for my Bella. As love is known for its many sacrifices. The harder we work for something, the greater meaning it holds when you finally achieve it. I shouldn’t have taken off, but I was at my wit's end. I needed to sit and rest, to take a moment and appreciate what I had before I began to take it for granted. Carlisle had raised me better than that, he had raised me properly. Seeing Bella kiss Jacob, it had been absolute torment., I’d never thought myself capable to have such feelings, Bella brought out the best in me, she made me un-oblivious to my feelings. Id never had a reason to care. Now, I listened closely to me heart and the sound it made when it sped back to life, or the feeling my stealth heart had much like frost bite, the feelings human felt when their skin had gotten too cold and then when it warmed again, happening so rapidly.. The burn, the tingling sensation. Perhaps what bothered me most was that he was a worthy opponent? I’d gotten particularly good at reading Bella beings I had not thee advantage of reading her mind. And id be but a fool not to see, though in love, not entirely blinded by it.

“ Edward,… I… oh my gosh. I… I’m so sorry Edward. Please, just…please don’t forgive me. I don’t deserve an ounce of forgiveness from you!” I heard Bella say, her voice consumed by guilt. Her guilt tormented me more than my own feelings and self pity. I just wanted her to have that slight bounce in her voice, the optimistic Bella I’d cherished. I heard the ice crackling beneath her feet as she inched closer to me. I’d suddenly remembered that there had been a pond just to the left of me, the ice couldn’t possibly hold. Just as I’d turned around to instruct Bella to get off the ice at once, it had been too late.

“EDWARD!!… HELP!!!” I heard her call out eerily. Her voice echoing through the empty woods, the fog thick just upon the water's surface, I seen her head barely afloat.

“ BELLA!! BELLA.. YOU MUST NOT PANIC, STAY AFLOAT BELLA!” I instructed as I ran to her but she had already went under…

“BELLA!!” I yelled out to her as I slid across the ice on my stomach, the friction slightly causing a burn. I plunged my hand in the water to try to grab for her out stretched hand but she had sunk too quickly. My stomach churned, my heart was lodged in my throat.

Without giving a second thought, I knew what I had to do, my Bella’s temperature was rapidly dropping in the below freezing water, I had to save her. By now she was probably in shock and unable to swim. I dove into the water, I searched around frantically the water was a Smokey grey color and had been murky, but I was determined. In the far off distance, I seen her strawberry chocolate hair, I instantly swam towards her, wrapping my arm around her and swimming to the surface. She had lost consciousness. Id been terrified I had not gotten to her in time, I was terrified it was too late, she didn’t feel like the burning sun when I touched her.. Instead, she felt like me.

“WHAT HAPPENED??” Jacob yelled as he ran to our aid.

Her complexion had been a pale grey, her lips were dark purple like a bruise, I instantly knew that she was not breathing. I could not hear her heartbeat.

“ quick, do compressions while I breathe for her!” I instructed as I carefully laid her down straightening her neck out and smoothing away the hair that had been stuck to her mouth.

He hesitated a little as he panicked. I knew there was no time to panic given the dire circumstances.

“NOW!!!” I yelled impatiently. The rage in my voice terrifying even myself. He quickly began the compressions.

“ 1..2...3!” he counted as he pumped her chest

I exhaled, filling her lungs with air in attempt to coax her heart into beating on its own. Placing my ear to her mouth, there had been nothing, her sweet breath had not been spilling from her lips.

Again… “1...2...3”…Jacob counted as he pumped her chest.

And again.. My air pushed through her lungs.

“Come on…come on Bella.. Breathe.. Please baby, … breathe!” I whispered pleadingly to her.

“1...2...3!” Jacob pumped.

Again…I would breath. I heard a gurgling deep in her chest. Instantly water splashed in my face as she went into a coughing fit and her lungs had cleared.

“Bella… Bella… it’s okay… I’m here Bella.. I got you! It’s going to be okay!” I assured her as I gently held her face in my hands. Her eyes fluttered open as she looked into my eyes terrified. It had been the most wonderful feelings to look into her eyes and see them so vibrant, so full of life. I'd been afraid there for a moment, I was never going to be able to look into her beautiful brown eyes again.

“Edward, hold me!” She said desperately trying to catch her breath.

Instantly relief washed over me, a heavy weight had been uplifted off my chest. My heart had been freed. My Bella was alive, my Bella was asking for me, she needed me as badly as I needed her. I happily obliged wrapping my arms around her tightly.

“shhhh, I’m here… I’m always going to be here!” I whispered into her hair as I pressed my lips to her head, kissing it.

I felt her shivering uncontrollably beneath me. I instantly realized, her temperature had dropped drastically. She would go into shock if she wasn’t instantly warmed. And as much as it hurt to say, I was not capable of providing such warmth to her. In this case, I’d only do her more harm than good. I’d hated the thought I couldn’t provide her every need.

“Jacob, quick, she needs your body heat!” I said, pulling away from her and pulling him towards her.

He graciously wrapped his arms around her as I draped a coat off of Bella’s back.




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