Burning Sun ( twilight)

Burning sun is a story based off the twilight saga. Burning sun has several mini chapters following closely to the story line's however adding more detail than beloved stephenie mayers wrote, just enough to keep you hooked. There are new scenerio's added but in such a way you'd truly thought it was written into the actual book. Burning sun has some of Bella's point of view but mostly edward's. Like midnight sun ( steph's partial release of edward's point of view). Help satisfy your craving to get inside the handsome vampires mind and hear of the constant struggles with himself and the decisions he's made along with his deep feelings for human Bella.


5. Tempting Fate

   I watched as Bella lie on the ground in pain, her back arching and her fingers digging into the palm of her hand as the venom pumped through her blood, boiling through her veins. My face twisted in agony as I witnessed this most horrific sight. And the terrible ultimatum I’d had thrust upon me that had been so sudden was thrashing around in my mind. I was to either watch Bella lie on the ground incredibly tortured as the venom burn through her veins and her blood boiled hoping that she didn’t bleed out from her wound and die before it had run its course, and in turn, she’d do more than lose her life that day.. She would lose her soul, the most beautiful part of her. Or, her fate could lie in my hands, or shall I say…my thirst and my will and I could siphon the venom from her very veins as I fed off her blood just enough to redeem her chance at life? In which, neither of these things hardly seemed rational at this point. I had to throw all sense of rationalizing out at this point, in which had always been a natural first instinct of mine. I had to save my Bella. Her life, and her fate, balanced in my hands. “ Bella” I whispered to her “ I’m going to take your pain away, I’m going to give you the chance I’d never gotten, your going to live Bella!” I promised her as I then took her wrist to my mouth slowly as I took a deep breath in and sunk my teeth in, instantly making the same sound as biting into an apple did, that sweet forbidden fruit that had been so absolutely tempting. Her warm blood instantly pooled into my mouth lingering on my tongue. The taste has been absolutely sensational, I sucked it in desperate attempt to clean her blood but also in a frenzy of unquenchable thirst, the taste had been unimaginably satisfying. I heard Bella grunting as I sucked her blood, and the sound faded off into a distance as I then became lost in an illusion in what seemed to be Bella’s whole life flashing before my eyes. A strange blinding bright light and a baby crying hysterically and being held up, a curly brown haired little girl walking unbalanced as she held her mother’s hand, then the same brown haired little girl rode a bike and fell off and scraped her knee and sat on the ground crying holding her knee to her chest when her loving mother quickly ran over and comforted her kissing her knee and the little girl instantly began giggling as the mother tickled her, then the scene instantly changed to a young Bella playing on the swings, and then every memory Bella and I had, ending at her and I laying in the meadow, which had been a big revealing moment in our relationship.

  Tasting the morphine in her blood and the shock of somehow being able to intrude in her visions by her blood channeling her thoughts through out my mind caused me to come to an abrupt stop, my hunger quickly subsided and the need to spare my Bella’s life had become far stronger than any other need I’d felt before. She had to be okay. Heaving, I spit the last bit out of my mouth and wiped any remaining debris from my lips with the back of my hand in disgust. “ Bella, love, please, you must be okay, please be alright!” I pleaded as I smoothed a stray strand away from her face. Her eyelids opened slightly as she coughed, her throat dry “ am I dead?” she muttered. “ No, not today, not on my watch!” I said shaking my head as I kissed her forehead and scooped her up into my arms. Her eye lids seemed heavy as she struggled to stay awake which I presumed had been from loss of blood, I couldn’t be certain of just how much I’d drained her of, along with how much she had bled out from her wound. “ Edward, please, don’t leave me!” She whispered looking up at me. I smiled as I looked down at her, clearly hiding the worry in my voice “ Never! Where else would I go?” I assured her. “ I’m so tired!” She slurred. “ Then you must sleep. Sleep now my love, you are my only love, dream only the sweetest dreams!” I said to her as she than closed her eyes, her rapid breathing coming to a steady slow and she lay her head upon my chest. I couldn’t believe how long I’d drank her blood absent-mindedly in a trance. I should have never risked her life like that. How selfish could I be? All that went through my mind is that I had to get Bella to a hospital and quick. I would never be able to forgive myself if she were to die under my care. I played with many different ideas of what I could do to end my life if for some reason I’d been too late and she didn’t recover. Human’s had it so much easier than is soul-less creatures. We couldn’t just hurl our self off a cliff, or simply slash our wrist, it had to be much more complex then that and well planned out. Perhaps I could seek out the volturi, maybe they would take pity on my pathetic and weak kind and viciously rip me apart? It was settled, I didn’t want to go on existing if Bella was not in my future, so if she didn’t make it, I would make a trip to the Voultry somehow without Carlisle, Esmé , Alice or the rest knowing, It would be a hard task to maneuver but I knew I was definitely capable of pulling it off. I shuttered at the very thought of me being too late and the pain I’d put my dear father in by causing my death, so I quickly shook these thoughts from my mind and locked them away for now.


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