Burning Sun ( twilight)

Burning sun is a story based off the twilight saga. Burning sun has several mini chapters following closely to the story line's however adding more detail than beloved stephenie mayers wrote, just enough to keep you hooked. There are new scenerio's added but in such a way you'd truly thought it was written into the actual book. Burning sun has some of Bella's point of view but mostly edward's. Like midnight sun ( steph's partial release of edward's point of view). Help satisfy your craving to get inside the handsome vampires mind and hear of the constant struggles with himself and the decisions he's made along with his deep feelings for human Bella.


1. A place for my head ( Bella's p.o.v)

   Edwards eyebrows furrowed as he watched me intently.. Never taking his eyes off of me. “Edward, I’m fine!” I spoke. I just felt a bit faint, that’s all. I mean…I just had a bit of a temperature, I’d be fine, really. I began towards the door to get some water, when suddenly the room began to spin, different colors splashing everywhere mixing together. I heard Edwards voice suddenly getting distant “BELLA?LOOK OUT!” He had said before I felt a sharp painful blow to my head and everything went completely black. “Bella? My love?…Please. Please say something? Please say that you are alright? Just like you always do?” Edward said, his voice shaking and full of remorse. I fought the unconsciousness of my mind to return back to him so that his voice would not be pained so much. It made me cringe just hearing my Edward in so much pain, to feel so tortured because of me and my refusal to stay put in bed like he had advised. I always had to show off when it came to him. I was so naïve at times. I was always so damn stubborn, usually it was something he loved about me, but I think today it felt like it would be the death of him. I fought to move my fingers, and I think I did.. Just a little, but it was still too hard to move.. My head was pounding.. It felt like my skull was being crushed under a hammer.


 I felt him sweeping a few stray hairs from my forehead as he spoke again, so softly and angelic, his voice so inviting… “Bella, please? If you could hear me, it would set my mind at ease so, if you’d just utter something, one word!” I felt something cold on my cheek and slowly began to regain consciousness. My eyes fluttered open slowly as they refocused. My eyes instantly met with his worried gaze, his beautiful honey eyes. I felt the back of his hand pressed to my cheek, it felt so good. I could tell he was breaking my fever of 104. “There are those beautiful brown eyes of yours I long to see every day. Thank heavens. You gave me quite a scare Bella, you know that?” He said , his lips pulling at the corners a little. I mustered up a smile myself, and then flinched as he touched my forehead lightly with his finger tips, his eyes full of concentration. “Ouch!” I cringed away from the pain with my first instinct. Why did this hurt so bad? “ I’m sorry” he whispered softly “That must hurt I’d imagine?” He said, his eyebrows still furrowed. He leaned down and kissed my forehead very gently. His cold lips felt so good against the sweat that pooled on my forehead. Suddenly his voice got stern and his face tense “Bella, I told you not to get out of bed, I told you that I’d fetch a glass of water for you myself if you’d like. Why must you always undermined me?” he must have seen the look of guilt that washed over me feeling like a tidal wave crashing against me pulling me under because it was then his tone of voice quickly changed “ Look… I… I’m very sorry.. It’s just..” he said in between pushing his lips to my hand “…I have not done a very good job protecting you. You’ve gone and broke yourself now. I caught you, but obviously not before harming yourself first. It would seem my reflex’s are a bit delayed. As to be expected when in your godly presence!” I seen disappointment wash over his face. “Edward, no” I shook my head “I’m fine. Just a klutz, as usual. But fine!” I insisted. He cringed a little, his head dropped down in shame. “Hardly!” He muttered quietly with defeat before he held a mirror to me. I examined my reflection carefully, I cringed at first, I looked awful. Black rings under my eyes, my face pale. And HE seen me like this? Then I struggled to focus, to look harder, to see what could be bugging him so badly? I had a gash on my forehead. He had put a butterfly bandage across it.

“ Oh, Edward, I.. I’m so sorry!” I gasped hiding my wound with my hand. “..Your sorry? For what? Don’t be silly Bella!” He snapped. “It must have been hard for you, I mean…the blood,… the smell?” I asked. He looked up again, his eyes to meet mine for a second “ Not really” he shook his head… “It was um… not that hard at all!”. “It wasn’t?” I asked confused. “You see, Bella, I’ve nearly lost you on several occasions, and I’d felt what it was like to lose you once, and that was enough excruciating pain for a lifetime to know what it would be like without you. I’d never intentionally cause you any harm ever again, so long as I exist!” He said looking over my gash again then quickly drooping his head down in defeat again ‘The hardest part was waiting….waiting for you to wake up and not being able to do anything!” He cringed. I felt terrible.. I lifted his chin to meet my gaze “Edward, I am so sorry” I whispered gently “god, I just can be so stupid”. “ You are not stupid Bella” he snapped as he cupped my face in his hands “ Just stubborn is all!” I couldn’t help but to laugh, I knew he wasn’t so far off from the truth. “ I really think we should take you to a doctor though Bella!” . “No!” I insisted shaking my head. “Charlie would freak out, the whole town would come to visit me, it would just be blown all out of context and made to be more serious than what it is!” He looked as if he was seriously considering it but wasn’t too sure. “ I just want to stay here, with you, please!” I begged. “..alright.., fine, but if anything gets worse, out of the ordinary to the least bit.. I’m taking you in, no objections Bella, you hear me?” he warned. I didn‘t like the idea at first, But I realized that some compromise had to be made at some point.“ Of course!” I nodded throwing my arms around him, before finally pressing my lips to his, in which he didn’t seem to object to. His lips moved with mine perfectly in sync

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