He Changed Me

"I'm sorry but he didn't make it, Taylor." Told the doctor.
I felt as if the whole world crashed down when the doctor delievered the heart-breaking news to me. If only we saved him on time!


Taylor Swann's life is perfect. Perfect grades, perfect look, perfect family and friends - this list could go on and on. But one day, out of the blue, her life becomes... Unperfect. When her life comes falling down, a handsome young man changes all that and makes her life perfect again.


(Read the story to find out what happens next.)


5. A Shocking Sight

Hey, here's chapter 5. But before you read the story, I need to tell you something. I haven't been getting a lot of comments on what you think of this story and I haven't been getting that much likes either. You have no idea how much I want this story to be in the What's Hot category. I'm sure that some of you writers want the same thing too. So please help a girl out! 'Cause I'm just gonna end up forgettin' 'bout this story and deleting it.


Chapter 5

After the little 'incident' happened, I decided to lock myself up in the bathroom. And can I just say it reeked of alcohol and vomit! I was too terrified to face everyone. Lately, I've been turning into a big wimp! I glanced at the digital clock that was on top of a cabinet that probably had some shampoos, etcetera. The clock read 9:15pm. I've been in the bathroom for half an hour. It seemed way longer than that! All that time, I was sat slumped against the bath tub wondering what to do. I ignored the fact that there was disgusting bacteria crawling all over the floor but my legs were aching and could no longer hold me up. I began to daydream about Tyler and sighed. I stopped dreaming about him as soon as I heard a loud pounding on the door.

"Whoever's in there, will you please hurry up?! Seriously, you've been in there for hours!" A girl yelled. I began to panic. I didn't want to get out just yet! But I had too. I unlocked the wooden door and looked to see who it was.

"Oh, hey Sarah. And sorry I took long." I apologised. Sarah was one of Jeremy's good friend. She was really kind and beautiful.

"Hey, Tay! And no probs, it's k. Oh, and where's Jeremy? If you're here, then he must be here too, right?" She questioned.

"No, he's not here. He said he's not feelin' well. I don't know what's wrong with him. He's being a bit... Strange, lately." I answered.

"I hope he does get well soon!" She told. I smiled sadly in response.

"Well, I gotta do my business so I'll catch ya later!" She said. I said bye to her and slowly walked down the stairs. The music was blaring which meant the party had just started. Great! Note the sarcasm. I went in the huge living-room and saw people dancing and spilling their drinks on the floor. I looked around to see if I could find anyone I knew. My eye caught something and it was Ashley and Hannah who were waving at me. Aside from Jade, Ashley and Hannah were also my best friends. Ashley has long, blond hair that reaches past her shoulders and her eye colour are brown. She did a nose job and made her nose tip higher. Personally, I think it looked better before the surgery. Hannah's hair colour is red (she dyed it that colour) and it reaches her back and her eye colour are also brown. They both are really pretty in their own ways. I walked over to them and sat next to them on a leather sofa.

"Hey girls!" I greeted.

"Hey! Did you come now?" Hannah questioned.

"No, I came ages ago. I was just... Wanderin' around." I lied.

"Oh. So, you enjoying the party?" Ashley questioned.

"Not really. Nothing to do here. Oh, and have you seen Jade anywhere?" I asked.

"Yeah, I saw her a few minutes ago. She's with a group of people who I didn't recognise. I think she went outside. Shall I try to find her for you?" Ashley offered.

"Yes please, that'd be nice." I answered. She smiled and got up to go search for Jade.

"Spit it out." Hannah said.

"Spit what out?" I questioned innocently.

"You know what. I've known you for too long and I know that something happened. You weren't really wandering around. Now tell me." She explained. I sighed in defeat and decided to tell her.

"Well, Jade got drunk. I got mad at her. She promised me she wouldn't get drunk. So she yelled at me telling me to live a little and then she stormed off. I began to search for her but instead, I got pushed against a wall by a stupid, drunk guy and I got really scared. But then someone got rid of the guy for me. Do you know a guy called Tyler? He's really good looking and he's got black hair that's spiked up with gel. He hangs out with a group of guys who all wear hoodies and converses. Oh, and he's also really msucular. Yeah, well, he's the one who saved me. Twice." I told her.

"Aww, that's so cute! He saved you twice! And yeah, I know who you're talkin' about. It's the cute one who always stares at you like as if he likes you or something. Yeah, carry on." She said.

"Well, after that, I decided to lock myself up in the bathroom." I told her. She stared at me for a moment and then roared with laughter.

"Hey, it's not funny!" I yelled. She stopped when tears rolled out of her eyes.

"Sorry, sorry." She said. I rolled my eyes at her.

"By the way, you look really pretty today!" She stated.

"If you're trying to make me feel better, it ain't gonna work." I told her angrily. She sighed sadly and faked crying. I began to giggle and gave in.

"You're so immature!" I giggled.

"I know I am. By the way, I'm gonna get a fizzy drink. You wanna come with? I'm not gonna leave you alone without protection by me!" I rolled my eyes at her again and walked past her. We walked into the kitchen and I stopped as soon as I saw what was happening. Hannah crashed into my back.

"Whoa, why have you - woah." She gasped. I saw Chase... Kissing... Ashley. My boyfriend kissing one of my best friends. My jaw was wide opened. The tears that were forming were threatening to pour out. Suddenly, I had a huge lump in my throat. I didn't want to stay here any longer so I ran out of the kitchen, through the hallway and out of the house. I heard Hannah calling after me and yelling at Chase and Ashley. I also heard another familiar male voice yelling at them but I was too upset to work out who it was. I could not believe that that had just happened. I walked shakily down the sidewalk and rubbed my tears away. I think I've cried enough for today! After a while, I heard someone calling out my name. I turned around and was hoping for it to be Tyler but unfortunately, it wasn't.

"What do you want?" I spat out full of hatred.

"I'm came here to tell you I'm sorry!" Ashley told.

"Well, sorry's not gonna fix anything. And what happened there?! I thought you were one of my best friends! Best friends don't go round kissing their best friend's boyfriend! How could you do something so... Low?" I cried uncontrollably.

"I... I -"

"Oh, and where's Chase? Is he too chicken to go after me? Well, if he is, tell him to man up. I would've said it to him myself but I don't wanna see his face ever again." I yelled at her truthfully. With that said and done, I stormed off leaving Ashley with her jaw dropped open.

*At home*

As soon as I got home, I ran upstairs and headed for my room. I changed into my pyjamas and walked into the bathroom. I washed the makeup off my face and dried it off with my towel. I then moisturised my face. After that, I walked into Jeremy's room. He was watching something. I'm guessing it's The Walking Dead. Once, he forced me to watch it and I got so scared, I couldn't go to sleep. I kept thinking that they'd would jump out in front of me.

"Are you watching The Walking Dead? 'Cause if you are, please close it. You know how I feel about that... zombie program." I whined. I saw him smirking and as he did so, he picked up the remote control and pressed a button.

"I've paused it. Oh, did you want something?" He asked.

"No, no. I just wanted your company. Something... Happened today at the party." I told him. He sat up straight away and patted the edge of his bed.

"Sit down and tell me." He ordered. I walked over to where he was sitting and joined him. I sat down on the bed indian-style and took a deap breath. 

"Well... I... I really don't feel comfortable about this." I admitted.

"You brought the subject up. Now, spill it out."

"IsawChasekissingAshleyintheparty." I mumbled. Tears were forming in my eyes. Luckily, he didn't notice it.

"What? I did not understand a word you just said."

"I saw Chase kissing Ashley." I said slowly. He looked shocked. The tears that had formed were already spilling out. Jeremy pulled me into a tight hug and rubbed my back soothingly.

"It's OK. I'll deal with him later." He whispered. After a while, I pulled out of the hug. I studied him and he looked worse than ever.

"Is it me or has your looks changed?" I questioned.

"Maybe it's you."

"Eh, maybe you're right. It's like I haven't seen you in ages. I guess it's 'cause I was revising so much." I told him. He nodded his head slowly. I looked around and screamed.

"Whoa, whoa, whoa! What's wrong with you?" Jeremy yelled over my screaming. I ran behind Jeremy so he could save me from the zombie.

"Z-Z-Zom-Zombie!" I shrieked. He roared with laughter after a while. 

"Why are you laughing?! It could kill us!"

"It isn't real!" He laughed out. I became puzzled. I stood up straight and realisation washed over me.

"Oh..." I realised that it was a zombie from The Walking Dead. He must've pretended to pause it on there to see my reaction.

"You jerk." I spat out. 

"I was just kidding around."

"It doesn't matter. But if I get scared, then I'm gonna blame you." I told him. I stuck my tongue out and headed for my room.


End of chapter. Sorry I took long to write this. Again. Oh, and remember what I wrote at the beginning of the chapter. Sorry for the wrong spellings. I'll edit it later.



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