Apart of me was missing (finished)

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  • Published: 29 Sep 2012
  • Updated: 13 Oct 2012
  • Status: Complete
imagine one day waking up and everythings normal, next minute your favorite boyband turning up at your door, only to find out when you meet them that one of them was your sibling, but who? how did it happen? and what happens next? youll have to read on to find out :) enjoy :) and please comment, critism or nice comments but please no hate, this is my first ever fan fiction, sorry if its rubbish though :)


23. woow

Louis's point of view

I was thinking long and hard, then I must have been my thinking face which is where I start biting my lip and start staring into space, because Harry came upto to me and asked what was I thinking of, I told him, he seemed to think it was a good idea he asked am I sure, I said yea, so I don't know where it came from but "Would you like to come live with me, my mum and my sisters, they would love you" I blurted out to Laura, everyone turned to me and turned to Laura, "I would love to really, but I couldn't put anything like that on your mum, plus id miss Chantelle and Charlotte" she said "we would be fine, you could come visit us whenever you want, and im sure if Louis's mum wouldn't mind we could visit you, we want what makes you happy and plus we have our mum and dads, but you don't, i'm sorry to say it" Chantelle responded "what about your mum and sisters Louis" Laura asked sweetly "my mum wouldn't mind she always said if ever your friends are in need of a place to stay, or just company, they are welcome here and she could use the help to, and my sisters said the same thing" which they did, to be honest "are you sure about this Louis I don't want to go there and your mum not like me or want me there" "nonsense i'll go ask her if you want" I replied to her, and left the room to phone my mum

Chantelle's point of view

woooow, Louis just asked Laura to move to his house, not in that way though, "id miss Chantelle and Charlotte" she says, she's always thinking about other people, I had to put her straight, I mean come on, not moving in with Louis Tomlinson and family is a daft thing, plus she would be lonely here we could easily visit her, awww she'd be taken care of, his mum seems really nice, Louis came back and said to her "well my mum umm... went mental, she was so exited when I asked her, when me and the boys went from your house, my mum phoned and I told them a lot about you and Chantelle  because we didn't know Charlotte then, she said that you seemed really nice, and this was a way of thanking you for putting up with us 5 boys and Paul to" she was speechless in the end she muttered out the words ........

thanks to the new readers for taking the time to read this, thanks for the other readers for taking the time to read it whether you like it or not, if you have any problems, like if im annoying you with, I don't know, if i'm just talking about a character and you want a certain character to be more involved or at the end of every chapter when I leave it as a cliff hanger, say if you don't like it, I'm writing this for you guys, I would love to hear what you think, or even asking me to do something with it :) thanks for reading :)

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