Apart of me was missing (finished)

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  • Published: 29 Sep 2012
  • Updated: 13 Oct 2012
  • Status: Complete
imagine one day waking up and everythings normal, next minute your favorite boyband turning up at your door, only to find out when you meet them that one of them was your sibling, but who? how did it happen? and what happens next? youll have to read on to find out :) enjoy :) and please comment, critism or nice comments but please no hate, this is my first ever fan fiction, sorry if its rubbish though :)

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41. The town hall continued

Still Louis's point of view

"i... uhhhhh.... splilled my cup of hot chocolate over it and the writings smudged, I've very sorry sir, very very sorry sir" when he said that, my anger built up "YOU WHAT!!!!" I yelled making everyone look at me but I didn't mind, I was furious, "I....... really .... reallly .....really very sorry" he stuttered, I got Daisy and Phoebe's hand and walked of there was tear streaming down my face, that was my only hope of ever finding my sister and that man ruined it, we got to the car and the twins new I was upset, they nodded to each other and hugged me, I hugged them back, they were crying to, "we will find her bro" Phoebe exclaimed, I only wish that I could believe it, so we got in the car and drove home, it was silent until you heard sobs coming from the back, it was the twins they were both crying, I hated it when I saw them crying, I had an Idea what may cheer them up, "would you like to go to the park and get some ice cream" their faces lit up "yeaaah" they both shouted, it always worked so we pulled up on the car park for the park, we all got out, luckily no - one was here otherwise I would get completely mobbed we the ran on the park and went on the slide, "come on Louis, come on the slide with us" Daisy yelled, so the big kid I am I joined in we stayed there for an hour, "now do you want some ice cream now to eat on the way home" I asked "yeaahhhh" they screamed again, so we went to the shop round the corner baught some ice cream and came out, we got back in the car and went home, when we arrived, Lottie, my mum, Fizzy and Laura came charging out to see if we had found her, "well... do you know were she lives or what her name is" my mum asked I shook me head and hung my head "no, we found the record but just as he was about to tell us her new name he split his hot chocolate on her record" I answered "WHATTTT!!" my mum blew up then, the twins had gone upstairs by this time, "i know thats exactly what I said, the twins were crying so I took them to the park, thats why were a bit late" I said "oh right I was wondering why you was along time I was hoping you had gone to see her" my mum replied then Lottie, Fizzy and Laura came and  hugged me, "I'm sorry Lou, I wish I could do something, but theres nothing we can do" Laura said sadly "it alright it's not your fault" we all hugged again, *ring ring* my phone rang it's Harry, probably asking , so I went outside and just as I suspected, so I told him the story, he sounded sad to after we talked he put the phone down so the day went by and at 12:30 am we went to bed, we all had a long day, so I went to bed and I fell asleep but ........

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