Apart of me was missing (finished)

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  • Published: 29 Sep 2012
  • Updated: 13 Oct 2012
  • Status: Complete
imagine one day waking up and everythings normal, next minute your favorite boyband turning up at your door, only to find out when you meet them that one of them was your sibling, but who? how did it happen? and what happens next? youll have to read on to find out :) enjoy :) and please comment, critism or nice comments but please no hate, this is my first ever fan fiction, sorry if its rubbish though :)


15. The Morning continued

Still Louis's point of view

Oh my word, I never knew the rain could be this bad, I know it was raining when we went to bed, but never knew the rain was this bad, the big puddle had now become what was like a river, the street was covered with dirty, brown water, if we even open the door all the water would come in and flood inside, it was that bad it came upto half way up everyone's door, across the road someone else was also looking at the river, I went back from the window because I didn't want anyone to see me just in case if they like us and decide to mob Laura's house, I don't know what Laura's going to think, but it seems like we have to stay a bit longer, I don't mind, actually i'm going to be honest, I love staying here I know we've only been here overnight, I feel like I can trust them with anything, yea it might sound stupid but it's true, there fun and lovely people to talk to, we didn't talk much because of only being here overnight but maybe this is our chance to get to know them more and a bonus, Paul likes them, he is normally hard to please and he doesn't hug many people back, seeing Paul hug Chantelle and Laura yesterday was really nice and put a smile on my face, I don't know why but something is making me feel secure, I heard footsteps coming downstairs, who was it? I wondered, then in came a sleepy Liam

Liam's point of view

*Yawns* morning Louis, I take it know one else's up then, "you guessed right" Louis replied giggling, "How long you been up" I asked Louis curiously, "about half an hour" he answered then he turned to me and said "look out the window" so I got up from the couch and looked outside the window and saw the street had flooded really bed, half of Laura's door in fact, "I sure hope Chantelle and Laura don't mind us stopping for a while" I exclaimed "that's exactly what I was thinking bro"  Louis replied. I noticed a pic of Chantelle and Laura in a frame, you can tell they were close, bless them, I was thinking of Harry and then Chantelle, "don't you think Harry and Chantelle suite" Louis replied, "yes I really do, awww there so cute" "I think Harry has a little crush on her, I can't tell with Chantelle, but I hope she does" Louis added "yea I agree", then I looked at the same picture again and said "Louis, you may not see it but me and the boys certainly do, but Laura looks a lot like you, even more than all your sisters" Louis looked at me and just as he was about to say something we heard muttering, not to long later we heard a lot of footsteps coming down the stairs and then in came everyone else, first Niall, then Harry, then Chantelle, next Laura, Paul was next and then Zayn was last as usual

"morning" they all said in unison "look outside the window" Louis warned, so they all went to the window and gasped, "look's like you'll have to stay longer" Chantelle said cheekily, we all laughed.


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