Apart of me was missing (finished)

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  • Published: 29 Sep 2012
  • Updated: 13 Oct 2012
  • Status: Complete
imagine one day waking up and everythings normal, next minute your favorite boyband turning up at your door, only to find out when you meet them that one of them was your sibling, but who? how did it happen? and what happens next? youll have to read on to find out :) enjoy :) and please comment, critism or nice comments but please no hate, this is my first ever fan fiction, sorry if its rubbish though :)


20. surprised

Still Laura's point of view

all I heard was laughing, and then the person next to me took his mask off, I was shocked, "LOUIS, YOU IDIOT YOU SCARED THE LIVING DAYLIGHT'S OUT OF US, but i'm glad it's you guys" I smiled and gave him a hug, he hugged back and gave me a kiss on the foreheard, then the rest of the boys took their masks of, "ZAYN YOU....... RAT" Chantelle yelled at Zayn but then laughed and hugged him, Zayn refused at first as a joke and crossed his arms and looked away, but then laughed and hugged her back, and lastly Charlotte added "hey Niall am I not squashing you, AND YOU MEANY FOR MAKING US SCARED" Niall answered "no of course not, your as light as a feather and awww sorry gorgeous"

Charlotte's point of view

OH MY NIALL JUST CALLED ME GORGEOUS, AHHHHHHHHHHHH, when Chantelle and Laura told me about the concert I was flipping out, but now, IM SAT ON NIALL JAMES HORAN'S knee, rright act calm Charlotte, he doesn't like girls screaming "it's ok Niall, I forgive you haha" "haha" he laughed

Niall's point of view

awww shes so cute, I feel bad now for scaring her, but she seems fine now, awww "indroduce us to your friend Chantelle" Harry said "this is Charlotte, ive known her quite long, about 6 years but not as long as Laura, I think we've known each other for 10 years, but yea" Chantelle smiled, there was some attraction to Harry and Chantelle, awwww, "it was Louis's idea to get you he missed you, we all did" I stated, "awww Boo Bear arent you sweet" Laura teased "heyyyy, don't call me Boo Bear, its terrible" Louis said with a smile "we missed you guys to, we got used to your arguing over the remote and who got the bathroom first" Chantelle added, everyone started talking to each other but Laura. Louis,Liam and Zayn were Talking, Chantelle and Harry, me and Charlotte, Laura seemed out of it, but Louis soon went over to her

Louis's point of view

I was talking to Liam and Zayn about where we are going next and then I noticed Laura on her own, looking like she was going to cry, so I went over to her as I would with anyone "whats...." as soon as I got to her she jumped aww haha,"sorry if i startled you" "Its fine" she said half smiling "whats wrong Laura" I quietly asked her, "oh nothing" she smiled, "there is, I know, I can feel it, I don't know how but I can" she looked at me and a tear streamed down her face, I wiped it away and hugged her, I felt warm inside with Laura, she felt like a sister to me, same with the boys, Chantelle and Charlotte to but I felt closer to Laura somehow "m.. m...my mum a....and dad h....a....ve" she paused and started crying for real, something was seriously wrong and I needed to know, I felt so helpless I hugged her tighter and she buried her head in my neck,"go on, but in your own time of course, im there for you babe, same with the boys and Chantelle and Charlotte"she looked up at me and smiled "thanks" she said "they've left me" I looked at her surprised, I was shocked, how can a mum and dad leave their child, and only child. "they are staying in canada and I am now living on my own, in the house" she continued ...... I couldn't find the words to say, she hugged me tighter and put her head in my neck again and started crying again, I was lost for words..........

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