Apart of me was missing (finished)

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  • Published: 29 Sep 2012
  • Updated: 13 Oct 2012
  • Status: Complete
imagine one day waking up and everythings normal, next minute your favorite boyband turning up at your door, only to find out when you meet them that one of them was your sibling, but who? how did it happen? and what happens next? youll have to read on to find out :) enjoy :) and please comment, critism or nice comments but please no hate, this is my first ever fan fiction, sorry if its rubbish though :)


4. Shocked

Chantelle's point of view

At last I've got the chance to tell Laura who I think she reminds me of, its been eating me up inside, she loves this person to bits, i bet she'd love who im gunna say, I've been thinking for ages, i just couldn't think who it was, then when One Direction came on the tele with what makes you beautiful it confirmed my judgement, i've never seen someone who looks that much like someone other than twins, this persons got siblings and even they don't look that much like him i then started to say "you remind me of and look a lot like ....... (i froze for a minute to wait for any interruptions plus it's funny making her wait haha they did it on x factor and it always got me shouting at the tv so im gunna do it to her

Two minutes later

"JUST TELL ME ALREADY" she impatiently yelled at me we both laughed and said " you remind me of Louis Tomlinson" her mouth dropped

Laura's/my point of view

"you remind me of Louis Tomlinson" as soon as Chantelle said it my stomach got tied the words got trapped ;) my jaw dropped and i couldn't say anything for 5 minutes, then I quietly exclaimed "are you serious" Chantelle responded "yea at first I couldn't think of who it was and then when One Direction came on tv with what makes you beautiful came on i knew instantly that it was Louis" 

I was Shocked.....

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