Apart of me was missing (finished)

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  • Published: 29 Sep 2012
  • Updated: 13 Oct 2012
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imagine one day waking up and everythings normal, next minute your favorite boyband turning up at your door, only to find out when you meet them that one of them was your sibling, but who? how did it happen? and what happens next? youll have to read on to find out :) enjoy :) and please comment, critism or nice comments but please no hate, this is my first ever fan fiction, sorry if its rubbish though :)

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44. saving Laura

Still Harry's point of view

we looked in the living room, no - one there, looked in the kitchen and bathroom no - one there, then  all of is apart from Louis went upstairs he stayed just in case of back up. so we went upstairs and into the first bedroom, no - one there, next bedroom no  one was there, we got to the last bedroom and found......... Laura on a chair tied up, there was no - one there with her, she shook her head as if to say no don't come in, but we did anyway we needed to save Laura, out of no - where Julie and Jamie came out from in the wardrobe that was near the door, we yelped, "so, you've  made some new friends here, and oh look it's the idiots Chantelle and Charlotte" Jamie said while cackling "dont you speak about them like that, and let Laura go" I yelled out angrily "well, aren't you brave, Harry, yes I know all about you, Laura, Chantelle and Charlotte did all love the band" Julie added "so, what is the purpose of this, you were supposed to be in Canada" Liam added "well  Liam, we thought we would come back and try to make up for this, when I found her gone I was angry that she left the house, so I asked around and found out where abouts you live, but I couldn't get a street or number so I just traveled around and there she was" Julie cackled, like a hyena, at this point from his pocket Jamie pulled out a knife, "now because she was bad and left the house without our permission she needs to be punished" we all gasped at this, Jamie's back was facing the door, and his face was facing Laura with daggers while Julie was looking in the wardrobe for something because she was cold, I was so worried, we are family and right now I'm petrified for Laura's life, just then we saw the door open very slowly and quietly, Jamie hadn't noticed this, then the person pounced on Jamie and grabbed the knife out of his hands, while Liam, Zayn, Niall and me went to the wardrobe, and while Julie wasn't looking got some rope and  and we all worked together to tie her up, Louis had the knife and threatened, "if you ever try to do that again, you'll be 6 feet under, Louis then grabbed the remaining pieces of rope and wrapped Jamie up with help from Chantelle and Charlotte, Perrie got this on camera, since that we would need evidence, and Eleanor phoned the police, when done so, she came and untied Laura, Laura hugged her tightly while shaking, within 15 minutes, the police came the police was dealing with Julie and Jamie they told us we could go home, we left them our address and we went outside, I got in my car with Liam, Zayn, Perrie and Niall while Louis, Jay and Laura went in Louis's car, Charlotte, Eleanor and Chantelle lived round here anyway so they just walked home after talking to us

Jay's point of view

what a day, i'm so tired, after we got in it was 12:00 am, when we got back  Lottie, Daisy, Phoebe and Fizzy had come back in from their friend's "were have you been" they asked in unison, "well...." we told them the story, when it had ended Lottie said "are you alright Laura" "yea" the others asked "i'm fine thank you, just my wrist hurts from where they tied the rope, they tied it really tight, my hands were turning purple" Laura replied they all hugged her and then went straight to bed, I was in my room, I was just going to take my coat of when something jingled, I remembered I put that silver thing in my pocket earlier, so I got it out and to my shock it was.........

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