Apart of me was missing (finished)

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  • Published: 29 Sep 2012
  • Updated: 13 Oct 2012
  • Status: Complete
imagine one day waking up and everythings normal, next minute your favorite boyband turning up at your door, only to find out when you meet them that one of them was your sibling, but who? how did it happen? and what happens next? youll have to read on to find out :) enjoy :) and please comment, critism or nice comments but please no hate, this is my first ever fan fiction, sorry if its rubbish though :)

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37. sad news to family

 

Still Liam's point of view

Laura kept crying and couldn't tell me what was wrong, so I calmed her down after half an hour of crying she finally muttered the words "s...s.....she and h....e...... is not my p.....p...p... parents" my face dropped "you what" I asked in disbelief "my, I mean Julie and Jamie aren't my parents, basically I've been living with someone who I don't know and have lived a complete lie" I was stunned, she then rested her head in my neck and started crying again, I even had a tear streaming down my face, how could someone do this to her, she doesn't know who her biological parents are, I bet their nice unlike Julie and Jamie, oh my word, we sat there for an hour, she fell asleep on me, a light knock came at the door, not enough to wake Laura but loud enough for me to hear, they  entered it was Harry, "whats wrong he asked" "shhh.... shes been crying for ages, she's just got settled, don't tell anyone I told you because I don't know if she'd want to tell you herself but, you can call her life a whole lie, the people who claimed to say that Laura was their daughter, wasn't infact her parents, there not her mum and dad" I whispered Harry's face just dropped "are you serious" he replied "would she lie, look at the amount of crying she's done "awwwww poor thing" Harry said, Harry stayed and we just talked about other stuff, 30 minutes after Laura began to wake up, "oh i'm so sorry Liam for sleeping on you" she said apologetically "shhhh.... theres no need to apologize" I said "thanks and hi Harry" she said trying to put a smile on "haha, hi Laura" Harry said, we went downstairs to the others, "are you ok Laura" Lottie asked worriedly "i'm fine thanks" she smiled "good good, what happened" she asked "Liam could you tell them, I don't mind then knowing or me being in the room when someones telling the story  but I cant bare to say it again" she asked sweetly "of course, are you sure though" I asked just in case "go on" she said, "so when she got that phone call yesterday it was Julie....." so I continued the story, Laura actually didn't cry, she actually seemed relieved, well I would be with people like them to be honest, it was just shock that's why she was crying, everyone then hugged her, one person said "we're always here, we're family" it was Fizzy, "yea" the twins said in unison very happy, then in came Jay with hot chocolates with whipped cream and sprinkles on for us all, she did the best hot chocolates, yum, "I heard everything, sorry Laura if you didn't want me to know, anyway, I heard and thought everyone could do with one of my special hot chocolates" she said smiling "haha it's no problem, you do the best hot chocolates you always manage to cheer me up, all of you do" Laura said smiling a real smile this time, "awwwww" everyone said "why don't you all stay here for the night, plus you lot are going tomorrow it will be easier for your driver t pick you all up from here" Jay suggested, everyone's faces lit up "yeaaaaaaaaaaa" everyone screamed and thanked Jay "i'll be upstairs out of your hair" she said "no no no Jay your staying here, you act like a teenager and you look like a teenager so you can join the teenagers, right guys" Harry said "yeaaaaaaa" everyone said in unison so everyone got settled the fire was on, Jay pushed all the furniture away and we all helped bring mattresses blankets, quilts, pillows and stuff downstairs we put them all in a circle, it was like paradise.

thanks to all my readers, really I mean that, you are all really great, I've not seen any criticism comments at all yet i've had people helping me and telling me that I need to edit things to make them make sense, thanks guys for that you know who you are, I thank you all for that, I thank you all for reading it, keep the comments coming criticism or good, no hate, I love hearing your feedback, anyone who hasn't commented please tell me what you think, if you want anyway, and thank you :)

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