Apart of me was missing (finished)

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  • Published: 29 Sep 2012
  • Updated: 13 Oct 2012
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imagine one day waking up and everythings normal, next minute your favorite boyband turning up at your door, only to find out when you meet them that one of them was your sibling, but who? how did it happen? and what happens next? youll have to read on to find out :) enjoy :) and please comment, critism or nice comments but please no hate, this is my first ever fan fiction, sorry if its rubbish though :)

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21. Meeting Eleanor and Perrie

Still Louis's point of view

she finally settled down a bit "why" I asked, unsure if I should do or not, "they d... d.... didn't love me, they said they never will" she sobbed,  I stood there in shock, I didn't know what to say, they left Laura, but why, she's so funny, carefree and kind, after just spending a week with her she and the other girls the boys and I though the're amazing, how could her parents not love her, she started crying again, Louis you stupid idiot, I told myself, after 5 minutes she stopped and tried to put on a smile, she pulled away and whispered "thanks Louis, your a great friend" I smiled at her and the others came towards us,  and then suddenly all we heard was "Louis, Zayn" it was Eleanor and Perrie, they ran over Perrie went to Zayn and gave him a hug and a peck on the lips and Eleanor came towards me and gave me a hug and a peck on the lips. "the concert was great babe" Perrie said to Zayn with a grin "thanks babe" he replied, "Eleanor, I'd like you to meet 3 girls, one who we have only just met, but  the others were them girls who I said that one of them let us sleep for a week at hers because of the flood" I said to Eleanor pointing to Chantelle, Charlotte and Laura, "awww, nice to meet you" Eleanor put her hand out to Chantelle, she shook it and replied "same to you" Eleanor did the same with Charlotte, when she got to Laura, she shook her hand and said "woow you look like Louis" "all the boys and Chantelle has said it to me" she giggled, I'm glad Eleanor made her laugh, but why do they say it though, I wondered

Laura's point of view

Oh my word, Im straight opposite Perrie and Eleanor, woow could this day get any better, and Now Eleanor has said that I look like Lou, what is going on? I questioned myself "I agree, she looks spitting image of Louis, I think she looks like Lottie aswel, but Louis mainly"  Perrie said, I thought, now Perrie said it to, not as I mind looking like Louis or even Lottie, Louis's so handsome and Lottie, and the rest of his sisters to be honest, are pretty. so we went in the car and they drove to mine, "haha Harry, you know your way to my house, well done" I told Harry smiling "Why thank you Laura" Harry said looking pleased with himself, "may we come in yours for a bit, if you don't mind" Liam asked me "of course, I would love it if you all came" I smiled at Liam, aww he's so sweet, "do you not mind us coming in" Perrie asked me "of course not, why would I" I smiled at Perrie and she smiled back and said "thanks" woow Perrie and Eleanor in my house, this day does get better, I may have lost my mum and dad, but now I've gained so much, Liam wen tin the house, then Zayn and Perrie, Lou and Eleanor, Harry and Chantelle, and then Niall and Charlotte and then me last, I wanted to make sure everyone got in fine, Harry tripped over the step, Chantelle was in front of him, so he had stop himself by putting his hand on Chantelle's shoulder, aww, they look so cute together, we were all sat down, Harry Lou and Liam on one sofa, Perrie, Eleanor and Niall on the other, Zayn sat on the arm of the sofa next to Perrie and Chantelle, Charlotte sat on the floor, I asked them if they wanted a drink but they said no, we was watching the music channel on tv when someone asked me........

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