Apart of me was missing (finished)

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  • Published: 29 Sep 2012
  • Updated: 13 Oct 2012
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imagine one day waking up and everythings normal, next minute your favorite boyband turning up at your door, only to find out when you meet them that one of them was your sibling, but who? how did it happen? and what happens next? youll have to read on to find out :) enjoy :) and please comment, critism or nice comments but please no hate, this is my first ever fan fiction, sorry if its rubbish though :)


29. Louis's house

Chantelle's point of view

Well, Niall and Charlotte had returned from their dinner, Charlotte told us that her and Niall are going out, when she told us we screamed and hugged them, we were sooo happy Niall may have found his princess awww, anyway, we finished pack Laura's things, she had a few suitcases, the rest of her stuff we'll pick up in the near future, so we got in the car and Louis was driving, I was sat next to Harry and Laura, Laura was really nervous, you could tell, she always bites her lip when she's nervous and she was biting her lip, Louis put the radio on and Live While We're young came on so we all sung to that it seemed to settle her nerves for a bit, but not for long, we arrived after a 1 hour and a half ride in the car after stopping of  to go to MC Donalds for Niall but we finally got here, no car was in the drive, which meant Louis's mum  wasn't in probably taking Louis's sisters somewhere fun because it was summer holidays, so we got out of the car, Laura took one deep breath in after picking up some of her suitcases

Laura's point of view

we arrived I was so nervous, I didn't know if Louis's mum and sisters would like me, I really wanted them to like me, so Louis opened the door and told me to go in, so he went in first and I followed with the others trailing behind with my luggage, so when I stepped in I looked around and it was huge, the hall was long and really nice he told all of us to go in the living room and sit down, they guys sat down, Perrie sat on Zayn's knee and Charlotte sat on Niall's,   Harry dragged Chantelle and sat her on his knee, Louis  went in the kitchen to make us all a drink and then he told me how to get to my room and because she knew where it was Eleanor helped me with my luggage and brought it there, when I went in my room, I looked around, it was cream and had a double bed with a rose at the bottom of the sheets, "do you like it" Eleanor asked ,me "I love it, its amazing" I answered, "this was a spare bedroom before, but Louis's mum must have made it cosy since she knew you were coming, I looked around a bit and then I thanked Eleanor, then we went downstairs, everyone turned round and asked me "how is the room "and I replied "It's perfect, I couldn't have ask for a better room" I smiled and they all cheered, right then Louis came in and out with drinks, when we all got ours, Louis asked "how is the room" I replied again "its perfect, I couldn't have asked for a better room, thanks sooo much Louis, I owe you a lot" "no you don't you put us up for a week and a night and never screamed and just considered us as normal people not as celebrities, so you owe us nothing and its really no problem""thanks so much" I got up and gave him a hug he hugged back and smiled, we all watched tv and drank our drinks, in the middle of a song we heard the door  open and then close, we all turned to see.......

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