Apart of me was missing (finished)

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  • Published: 29 Sep 2012
  • Updated: 13 Oct 2012
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imagine one day waking up and everythings normal, next minute your favorite boyband turning up at your door, only to find out when you meet them that one of them was your sibling, but who? how did it happen? and what happens next? youll have to read on to find out :) enjoy :) and please comment, critism or nice comments but please no hate, this is my first ever fan fiction, sorry if its rubbish though :)


43. kidnapped

Laura's point of view

Louis and me were just taking a walk  because Lottie, Daisy, Phoebe and Fizzy had gone to their friends, so Louis and me were having a little talk and then suddenly 2 hands grabbed me from a bush, they put their hands on my mouth so I couldn't scream, they drove me in a car, Louis just turned around and the last minute to see me at the window, he ran after me but couldn't catch up, he turned back around and ran towards home

Jay's point of view (as this was going on)

I went upstairs to get everyone's washing, I had already got Louis's since he needed them more with him traveling s much, I went in Fizzy's room and got her washing, then I the twins got theirs and put them in the washing basket, then Lottie's and then finally I got to Laura's, I opened the door and saw the bags she must have been talking about so I went in the bag, to find the bag of washing, I lifted the bag up then something caught my eye, something silver it was glistening but I couldn't make out what it was because it was dark in the bag I wondered what was it, so I picked it up and was just about to look at in when the door slammed open, I put the object in my pocket still without looking what it was, so I went to the stairs to find out who or what it was, I looked to find a tired Louis at the door, he looked so worried "whats up" I asked him "I....i...its L......Laura, shes been k...... k......kidnapped" he panted, my mouth dropped "how, what, when, we better go find her, do you know where they would have gone" I managed to stutter, Laura is family, I was so worried, so we went in the car as we got in Louis told me "I don't know fr sure who kidnapped her but I may have an idea, drive to the guys house, we may need assistance" so I was driving, we stopped at Liam's first, Harry and Chantelle was their it which made it easier, we explained and Harry took his car along with Chantelle and Liam, then, we got to Zayn's, Perrie was there to, so they came in our car, we made it to Charlotte's our last stop, Niall was there so we all got in our car, all the way their my heart was beating a million miles an hour, s Louis told us the last stop was Manchester, who was their that he thought would kidnap Laura, so anyway Louis gave us directions to where he wanted us to go, Harry was following us in his car, when we got to a certain point, he knew were we was going, so we got to the destination, Louis told me to stay in the car because we need someone to drive f quick as soon as we got her out, so I stayed, they knocked on the door, no answer, they knocked again, still no answer

Harry's point of view

we all knew who it was, and it was definatly them so we knocked twice, no answer, so we all gave each other the nod and Louis, Liam and me broke the door down, we saw.........



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