Apart of me was missing (finished)

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  • Published: 29 Sep 2012
  • Updated: 13 Oct 2012
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imagine one day waking up and everythings normal, next minute your favorite boyband turning up at your door, only to find out when you meet them that one of them was your sibling, but who? how did it happen? and what happens next? youll have to read on to find out :) enjoy :) and please comment, critism or nice comments but please no hate, this is my first ever fan fiction, sorry if its rubbish though :)


31. first night in the house

Laura's point of view

Louis's family are so nice, to be honest even nicer than my own when they were here, Chantelle and Charlotte were texting me during watching tv they were asking how everything was, after half an hour they went and let me get on with talking to Louis's family, that night at 11:00 pm Lottie, Fizzy and me we're in Lottie's room, getting to know each other and having a laugh, Daisy and Phoebe we're in bed, we got our Pj's on at 9:00 pm we we were talking in Lottie's room after that, we we're getting on to the subject of guys and what kind of guys we would like, we heard a knock on the door, Lottie shouted "enter" it was Louis, "mum wants us downstairs for a surprise, even I don't know what it is" Louis's said, we all looked at each other and went downstairs first it was Lottie then Fizzy, Louis then me, we went downstairs to the kitchen, then Jay told us to sit down in the front room, so we did as we were told, 10 minutes later, Louis's mum  came in and out with hot chocolate with whipped cream and sprinkles, it looked delicious, then she turned the lights of and put a film on, it was one of the best nights ive ever had other aswel as the concert and meeting the boys, at 12:00 am  the film finished, we all started talking about girly things, Jay was like a teenager shes great, I wish I had a mother like her, Daisy and Phoebe came down after a while, we had the fire on and just talked, it was great, I felt like I was part of their family it was so nice, at 1:30 am "I think its time for bed everyone" Jay said "awwww" everyone moaned so we all dragged our feet upstairs, everyone went to their rooms,  I opened my door and a hand stopped it from opening, it was Louis,  "before you go to bed, I want to ask you, how did you like today and the family" Louis asked "it was amazing, the best day ever other than the concert and meeting you guys, seriously it was brilliant" I replied "glad you liked it, we do this on special occasions and things, but we have hot chocolate everyday in winter but because it was cold today, and because it was a special occasion she must have decided to do this" he said with a smile, awww im going to like it here, "awww I really do love it here, and with being an only child, this is so good and theres company" I added "awww I can tell you like it, well anyway goodnight sleep tight, hope you sleep well" he said "awww I will and goodnight  sleep tight to you" and with that we went to our rooms,  when I got in, I  l just went in bed and as soon as i hit the pillow i went straight to sleep thinking of all thats happened

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