Apart of me was missing (finished)

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  • Published: 29 Sep 2012
  • Updated: 13 Oct 2012
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imagine one day waking up and everythings normal, next minute your favorite boyband turning up at your door, only to find out when you meet them that one of them was your sibling, but who? how did it happen? and what happens next? youll have to read on to find out :) enjoy :) and please comment, critism or nice comments but please no hate, this is my first ever fan fiction, sorry if its rubbish though :)


34. confession

Still Jay's point of view

"well.... when Louis was one, I got pregnant, yes with Louis's dad before you ask, and when Louis was 2, I had a little baby girl" I said their faces and mouths dropped, "wooooow" all of them said in unison, "are you serious" Louis asked, "really, I'm sorry for not telling you sooner, i'm really sorry" I started to cry i couldn't hold it in Louis came to me and hugged me and the rest of them surrounded me, "It's ok we understand" Lottie said nodding to the others as if to say yes, "yea it's fine, so what happened next, were is the kid" Fizzy asked  "well, I was at the hospital and I had just had the baby cleaned it up and I held it for the first time wrapped in a blanket that Louis's dad got it was very unique, and I had a necklace round me, I bought it especially for the baby, I knew me and your dad Louis new what we was going to have so we planned names and got the necklace with the baby's initial on it, so I placed the necklace in the blanket I wanted a shower and I was really tired so they took the baby in the baby room, after 15 minutes of being in the shower, I went to my bed I was just looking around and then I saw a woman, she was acting really suspicious, keep looking through the baby room but I just thought she was looking at her baby, but I then saw her go in, get a baby and take it out of the room and run, she ran out and a nurse tried to stop her but she had gone, 10 minutes later, they came to me and told me that it was my baby, the baby had been kidnapped, I cried for hours, I didn't eat for 4 days, but Louis told me to eat,and until you girls came along, Louis got me through it, and then you girls came along and I felt like I had most of my life back, but I still felt apart of me was missing" everyone was speechless it must have been at least 15 minutes until someone spoke up "i'm soooooo sorry and w.... a.....s it a boy or a..  girl" they stuttered, it was Louis, "a girl" I replied "what was her name" Phoebe asked "Jodie" I replied again everyone looked down and really sad "Jodie Tomlinson then" Louis said "I wish I could find her, the stupid idiotic woman that took her had changed her name" Louis continued I really want to find her again, "so will the girl have a necklace with a 'J' on it then" he continued again "yes unless it fell out or something but I wrapped it safely in there so she may have it, just then every one came Harry, Liam, Niall, Zayn, Chantelle and Charlotte Charlotte was holding Niall's hand and Chantelle was holding Harry's hand, whats been going on, Eleanor then Perrie, they wanted to see if Laura had settled down, they have been coming once a week, there so sweet, I wonder if anyone is going to tell them about Jodie.

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