A London lamppost

Agnes Jensen is on a vacation in London, she's having a great time and is enjoying to be herself without having to talk to someone all the time.
But then, while she's trying to decide what to have for dinner today, a boy walks into her, and she hits her head on a lamppost, and passes out.

Later when she's taking a walk she suddenly stops at a red door, she feels both drawn to and repulsed by this strange door.
What behind it? And was it really just a coincidence that she chose to go on a vacation precisely London? Maybe she was supposed to be there...

There will come some chapters sometimes, but I'm too busy right now to submit a lot, sorry...


5. Weird behavior

Boris p.o.v.


Great Boris, you did it again, made her angry I mean, if you got paid for that, you’d be a billionaire within a week.

My brain is so encouraging… But I guess it’s kind of right, I wonder what I did wrong this time, she seemed to be having fun in there, or at least it scared the hell out of her, hehe.

Until the eye contact, I wonder why that made her so mad, maybe if you make eye contact with someone in Denmark it’s insulting?

Naaah, that would be too weird, I mean, Denmark can’t be that different, the Danes are practically our neighbours.

I wonder if she even knows how to get home, after all she hasn’t been here for so long.

Well, I guess I’ll find out, if she’s outside the door she found a way, if not… If not we’ll take it from there, or I will, how come I said we? I probably meant my brain and me, after all I am weird, and weird people are allowed to think weird stuff. I think, that is the most logical explanation I can think of, explanations and me are not best friends.

I guess I should go catch a bus.




“Well, hi!” I say as I see her outside my door.

“Can you just unlock the door?” She asks me, she kind of reminds me of my 14-years-old sister, so I can’t stop myself from laughing a little bit. “What’s so funny?” She asks me, she’s clearly confused, and mad, I can see that on her facial expression. “Nothing, you just reminded me of my sister, with the attitude you know?” I say quietly laughing. Apparently she doesn’t know, and if she does she won’t admit it.

“Well somebody forgot their humour at home.” I say irritated. And unlocks the door.

She steps inside and sarcastically says thanks you. Girls… I’ll never learn to understand the girl-world, I wonder if girls even understand it? No matter what it’s bloody confusing.

Did I ever mention that I listen to music a lot? Well, I do, so I quickly put on some music, and skips the first song, because it’s not really a song, just some music, and I’m just not in the mood for that right now, actually I skipped a lot of song, until I found the right one.


“The birds the sang,

At break of day,

Let’s start again,

I hear them say,

It’s so hard to just walk away


The birds they sang,

All in choir,

Let’s start again,

a little higher,

It’s a spark in sea of grey


The sky is blue,

Don’t lie to me it’s true.”


I love that song, in case you don’t know it, it’s “Up with the birds” – Coldplay, Coldplay is pretty awesome. I always sing along on the first part of the song, but then I can’t remember the rest of the lyrics…

It’s just a great song, the way it’s starts up really slowly, and kind of sadish, I wonder if that’s a word? I don’t think it is, but I like it, sadish, hehe.

Anyway, it starts up slowly and then it gets a little happier, and well, usually it makes me happy. Usually this album makes me happy actually.

Maybe that’s why I feel like listening to it right now, because Agnes is definitely not fun to be around right now. But I succeed in finding something to read, now I sound smart, but actually it’s just Donald Duck… I just thought you should know, so you didn’t get the impression that read a lot of books, because I don’t, I did when I was younger, but not anymore.

And Donald Duck is pretty awesome by the way, I love that word, awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome, I could just continue forever, but I won’t, don’t worry. Awesome, MWUHAHAHAHA, sorry, I just needed to do it one more time...

I better get this thing with Agnes sorted out before it’s too late, and then I can read, deal? Deal. But when I enter the kitchen, were she was seconds ago, she’s gone.



DAM DAM DAAAAAAAAM!! Sorry, I just had to do that….:I

But don’t worry the chapter isn’t over yet.:)

Because this time I’ve decided to try to write a long one!:D



Agnes p.o.v.


I hear him singing, and I can’t stop myself from smiling just a little bit, because I think I found a contestant for: “Europe’s worst voice 2012”! But it’s kind of cute though. No no no no no no, don’t do this to yourself. This can’t be happening. I don’t want it to happen! Yes you do. I think quietly to myself. But it wasn’t on purpose, it was like it wasn’t my thoughts, but that’s ridiculous, of course it’s your own thoughts. Who else would be thinking in your head? Me, I hear myself think with that mysterious quiet voice again. Listen to me. I gasp at the sound of the voice, I don’t like this, I don’t like this at all. What!? I yell in my thoughts, why should I listen to you? I don’t even know who you are! It’s me, my child, you know me, you just don’t know that you know me. I know that this might seem strange to you, but I need you child, I need you so much. The voice fades away as it talks, and suddenly it’s gone.

I don’t know what it was, but something made me turn around and leave the small apartment.

I practically run down the stairs, like I’m afraid he’ll try to stop me, even though I know deep inside that nothing can stop me know. I’ve got to go there! Go where? I don’t know where I’m going, but still I do know. I can hear him yell me name out the door, and immediately I start running even faster, because I’m not going down the stairs anymore, so now I can.

I can hear him starting to run down the stairs like I was a few seconds ago, and for some reason I panic. The minute I get outside I start to sprint down the streets, people are looking at me, but I don’t really care, I just need to get there, now!

Somehow I manage to avoid every obstacle that might be in the way.

I can feel that I shouldn’t really do this right now, I start getting dizzy, and I can see spots on my eyes, NO! I can’t pass out now! This is important, way more important then that stupid concussion. Even though I feel horrible I keep running, but I can feel myself slowing down, and finally I stop at a red door. I immediately feel repulsed by this weird door that stands out so much in comparison to the other normal doors.

But still I’m curious, I feel torn inside, it’s like I know that there is something behind that door, something that I need to know, something very important. I feel like if I open this door, there’s no way back, that this will change everything forever, but that can’t be true, can it?

This can’t be! It must be a dream! I have no clue of what I should do. I feel like I’m supposed to open the strange red door. But I’m afraid to do it. I don’t know what lies behind it. Maybe it’s just an ordinary house with an unusual door, and I’m just imagining these feelings? Maybe it’s just an ordinary door, and someday someone decided to paint it red. Who knows?

Well, not me if I don’t open it. Maybe I should knock before I just enter some random person’s house? Suddenly I hear someone calling my name, and I know exactly who it is.

I make a quick decision and I quickly open the door and steps over the threshold.


So that’s it for today.:)
What do you think of my story so far?

And what do you think is behind the door?

I would love a comment sometimes just so you know.:D

This chapter is 2 and a half pages long on word. I just felt like telling you that.:P

It's not as long as I wanted it to be, but I'm still pretty satisfied with this.

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