Promise

this takes place 2 years after the first book
Jackie is an international celebrity and she lives in L.A. and one night she has a dream about the promise she made to Liam she moves back to England. Mekayla lives in Jackie's old flat and is still with and Jackiemoves into a giant house. She texts Liam and it turns out they are nieghbors! They visit eachother a lot but Liam just isn't the same. Find out why in this story. I would love to hear what you think!!

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3. Surfing Contest!

"Your insecure, don't know what for. Your turning heads when you walk through the door."

Liam's POV

I didn't know Jackie could surf! Well it has been two year so there is probably a lot I don't know about her. Jackie was telling us about how she had to get away from all of the fame and her new album. Then Liam said "Why don't we ask Simon if she can do a song with us?" Jackie said "I would love that!" Then all of us said "So would we." The rest of the ride was quiet. When we got to the beach the first thing Jackie did was get her surf board and screamed "SURFING CONTEST!" We all laughed. Then we all grabed our surfboards too. We ran right in after Jackie. We went out where the good waves are we all went. Jackie was still after there were no waves the all the sudden she started to paddle and then a huge wave began to form Jackie stood up and she did the coolest tricks!When she came back onto the shore. We all clapped. She said "Surfers heart!" Then went back in the water. We saw a car pull up and Zayn come out. We all said "Hey Zayn!" He said "Where is Jackie?" I pointed out in the water.

Zayn's POV

Liam pointed out in the water I saw Jackie on her board. She skipped over so really good waves. Then there were no waves and she paddled and a giant wave came and she surfed it. She was awesome. But, when she saw me she fell off. I felt bad. Then she just went back out a sat on her board. I brought my board so I paddled out and I sat next to her then she just sat there and I said "I am so sorry." She just sighed and said "For what?" I said "For coming." She said "Don't be!" I said "I should be!" She said "I-I was just suprised." She said. I saw a tear forming in her eye. I said "Jackie, I am sorry for over-reacting that night. I felt so bad. I wanted you back. Can we please start over?" She took a minute to awnswer. Then she said "I can't have the risk of you breaking my heart again." My heart sunk and I got a wave back.

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