Best Friends or More?

Louis falls in love with his best friend, Trisha. And Niall falls in love with Trisha's best friend, Ally. Niall makes one mistake leaving Ally heartbroken. Harry and Ally become closer, and then something changes their whole life! Will Ally end up choosing Niall or Harry? Read and find out :) Some parts are rated R. My first fan fiction, don't hate. Leave comments! :)

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8. Best Night Ever.


Trisha's POV

"And I'll take care of you" I kissed his neck after I said that, what of it's too soon. Yeah, we've known each other for five years, but we just started dating. I'm so stupid for telling him that. "Babe, are you okay?" Louis asks me, looking into my eyes. "Oh Lou, I'm sorry for saying that. I know we just started dating and I just love you. I know I'm a virgin and you aren't, I'm just so stupid for telling you that..." I said, my eyes tearing up. "Hey, don't cry love. I'd love to make love to you. I know you're a virgin, so I know you're scared. You're not stupid, I've wanted you to be mine for along time. I will make the rest of tonight very special. I love you, Patricia." "I love you too, Louis." I said, kissing him. We just got back to the house, and Ally is still in some pain. Niall is taking her to their room to lay her down. I feel bad for her. Louis grabs my hand, dragging me to our room. 'Someone's a bit horny tonight' I thought to myself. I started laughing at myself, but out loud. "Love, why are you laughing?" Louis asks. "Oh, no reason." I say, crashing my lips onto his. He pulls me closer to him, with his hands in my waist. I wrap my arms around his neck, tangling my fingers trough his hair, and then I rip his shirt off. He pulls away. "Are you sure you're ready?" he asks me, looking into my eyes. "I've been ready for this moment for a long time, that's why I've waited for you." I say. He then takes my dress off, he starts kissing me again, passionately. I undo his jeans and yank them down. He starts laughing at how excited I am. He then then undoes my bra. I get a bit nervous and he could tell. "Babe, if you aren't ready, we can wa-" "I'm ready, I'm just nervous because I've loved you forever and I finally get my chance with you." I say, looking into his eyes. "okay love." he says, smiling. I take off his boxers and start to turn him on easily, teasing him badly. "Love..." "Yes?" I ask, innocently. "You're making me want you more." "That's the idea." I say. He then throws me onto our bed, and gets on top of me, kissing my neck. I let out a small moan. I was ready for him. He takes off my panties and I bite my bottom lip. "This might hurt you, love. So I'm going to be gentle." "Okay." I say, taking a deep breathe while he gets inside me. "Oh my god!" I scream. "Are you okay, love?!" I ask, worriedly. "Yes, just keep going." I say. He starts thrusting hard, and surprisingly it doesn't hurt anymore. I feels good, pleasuring. I didn't want him to stop. Then I arch my back and I feel so good. He then pulls out. "Why'd you pull out?!" I ask. "Because, we climaxed love." he says, sweetly. I love this boy. And with that, we laid there talking with my head on his chest. I slowly drifted off to sleep, when I heard a bunch a loud noises. "Oh, Ally and Niall."
I whispered to myself. "They are having some fun, just like you and I did." Louis  says, laughing at what I just whispered. I wanna marry this boy.
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