Paragraph Requests

Give me a sentence (leave it on my blog message), and I'll make a paragraph using it - using it either at the start, in the middle, or even the end! Anyone can give me a sentence request for this, and I'll try and turn it into a paragraph as soon as I can! Example: Sentence: The trees swished in the breeze. Paragraph: I lifted my hand up to brush my hair out of my face. The forest was now quiet, except for the sound of the trees that swished in the breeze. I'd left home only half an hour ago, and although I'd never wanted to go back, I was now doubting myself. Get it? Good! Well drop me a sentence and I'll get writing!


16. #16

Whoever is dead,
Whenever they died,
Please remember they were once alive.
(Requested by Lia-loves-cookies)


It had been a month now since my little brother Sammy passed away. It was heart-breaking for all, but mostly for me. I'd always loved my younger brother. We never fought, always playing nicely together, and we had so much fun. If just it wasn't for that day, that day that went past so slowly, I couldn't bear it. We were in the car, of course, on the way to taking Sammy to Nursery. My mum was distraught because she'd recently broke up with her boyfriend, and wasn't exactly concentrating when we came to a red light. Without thinking, she zoomed past it, crashing into a car coming from the other direction. She was lucky really, that she wasn't the one dead. And so was I. Sammy, unfortunately, wasn't. But from there, every bit of my life fell apart. My mum met this guy who I absolutely hated, and forgetting about the past, they started a new life together. Marrying a month later, having another kid. But what hurt the most, was when she re-painted Sammy's room, dumping all his furniture, toys, everything out, and replacing it with stuff for the new baby. All I wanted to do for ages was scream, and stamp, and cry. Nothing would ever be the same as it was. I wanted to tell mum, tell her that what she did was wrong, but I didn't have a chance, I never had a chance. It's like she just forgot about me too, and she probably did. Which is why, before she died, I had to tell her one last thing: Whoever is dead, Whenever they died, Please remember they were once alive. And she smiled, just like that. I knew she was thinking of Sammy. And she knew I was thinking of him too.


*Here's another emotional one - sorry guys! - but hope you like it anyhow!*

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