Thinking Back To The Days...

This is an attempt for a good poem, but it kind of failed. PLEASE let me know how this could improved, because I'd love for it to be much better than it is! :D

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1. Thinking back to the days

I lie there all alone, thinking back to the days,

The days when all was right,

No wrong.

 

The ringing of bells,

The sing song cheers,

The times I’d never forget.

 

I lie there all alone, thinking back to the days,

The days when all was right,

No wrong.

 

The constant attention,

The loving kind,

The time I was always remembered.

 

I lie there all alone, thinking back to the days,

The days when all was right,

No wrong.

 

The pretty remarks,

The smiles down the street,

The time I actually looked fine -  Just fine.

 

I lie there all alone, thinking back to the days,

The days when all was right,

No wrong.

 

The sparkle in my eyes,

The glint in my smile,

The time I’d actually been happy.

 

I lie there all alone, thinking back to the days,

Wishing they’d come back,

No luck.

 

 

 

 

 

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