The way he looks at me

Blurb - I just recently wrote this poem , and I would love sone feedback on it to help me improve it so if you can help then thanks.

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1. The way he looks at me

The way he looks at me is a way that one will not forget
There is not a word that can describe the hatred burning in his eyes
Or the way he dooms the transparent skies
The way he looked at me is a way that one will not forget
There will never be a word
A single word
That can ever describe the longing in his eyes
Or the way my fragile heart could die
The way he will never look at me is a way one will not recall 
There will never be a word to describe the look of trust that is distant to his eyes 
Or the way my brain wants to lie 
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