Unplanned Love

17 year old Brianna and her friend,Maddy, have been waiting to go to a One Direction concert forever! They finnaly get tickets, as they are walking back to the car something happens, Brianna wakes up in th hospital. When she gets out she nveer expects to fall in love. I don`t have the best grammar skills but i hope you enjoy it:)


2. pain

One Direction was the best concert i had ever been to. I screamed my head off when Niall sang Stereo Hearts. I couldn`t believe that some one would say he shouldn`t be in the band hes phenomenal! I cried when they sang Moments.

'I can`t believe we just saw One Direction!' Maddy said still in disbelief.

'I know! That was so amaZAYN!' We both cracked up in laughter.When i could finnaly breath again i said 'Ok well i gotta go to the bathroom, come with me please?!'

'Alright fine.' We decided to stay for another 20 minute just to let the traffic clear out. We had special VIP parking that we paid extra for. It was cool because One Directions tour bus was parked near it, we already got pictures of it.

'Oh crap,hey Bri.'


'I think i dropped my phone back there.' I heard panic in her voice.

'Crap, not good! Did you have it when we came out of the bathroom?'

'Yeah, i texted my mom when we got out the door. I`m gunna go look, you go on ahead and start the car.'

'Ok i really hope you find it!'

She threw me the keys i could see the car up ahead.There were no cars left in our lot. Glad we decided to leave after every one else.I hate traffic. I was lost in thought when i heard it. A gun being fired. Before i knew it there was this excruciating pain under my right shoulder. I fell and hit my head on the blacktop. More pain. I looked up and saw a man standing over me. He grabbed my purse and ran off towards the city. I was lying in a pool of my blood. Things started going blurry, i felt dizzy, and i could feel myself getting weaker every second.The scent of blood was making my ears ring. I heard a scream. Then someone yell Brianna. I knew the voice as she came closer. Maddy. I could hear her calling the police telling them to send an ambulence now.

'Don`t leave me Brianna, come on, stay with me.' I could hear her say. I felt pressure on my wound and let out a moan. The last thing a remember was seeing 5 more people stand over me. Then i heard the ambulence sirens and everything went silent and black.

   Maddy`s P.O.V.

One direction was absolutely incredible! I just couldn`t believe that we were actually here! I was on cloud 9. Right now everything was just perfect.When it was over i was a little sad though because the experience had to end.

'I can`t believe we just saw One Direction!' I said with a little disbelief but i knew that it happened

'I know! That was so was amaZAYN!  I lost it when she said that.When we finnaly calmed down we went to the bathroom and waited awhile before we left. As we were walking i reached into my pocket to grab my phone and it wasn`t there.

'Oh crap, hey Bri.'


'I think i dropped my phone back there.' I started to panic.

'Crap, not good! Did you have it when we came out of the bathroom?'

'Yeah, i texted my mom when we came out the door. I`m gunna go look, you go on ahead and start the car.' 

And so she left to go to the car. I didn`t have to go far to find my phone. It must have slipped out of my pocket.Then i heard a gunshot. I usually would`ve thought well it`s the city you ought to hear a gunshot once and awhile, but this one sounded close. I shot around the corner to see a guy grab my best friend`s purse and run away. Then i saw Brianna on the ground,a pool of blood around her.  I screamed and ran over to her.'Brianna?' I called the cops as fast as i could and told them everything. 'Don`t leave me Brianna, come on, stay with me,' I said with tears running down my face. I put my hand over the wound like the parametics said to. I heard other people run up behind me but i was to devastated to look and i couldn`t take my eyes off of Brianna. I could hear them whispering but i ignored them.I felt a comforting hand rub my back and started to cry even harder. The paramedics and cops arrived,put her on the stretcher, and took her away with sirens blaring. I finnaly looked up to see who was behind me. I looked up to see the 5,crying faces of One Direction.

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