The little Zayn

A little girl was playing on a field. All alone, all by herself. She ran from one side of the field to another, without stop. At last she almost couldn’t breathe, and she was more than exhausted. She sat down, and after a little while her breath was almost regular. Then suddenly out of nowhere, a little boy came towards her. He sat down in front of her, and looked her in her eyes. “What’s your name?” he asked, and smiled at the little girl. “-My mom says I’m not supposed to talk to strangers” she answered. “-Okay then. My name is Zayn. Zayn Jawaad Malik. Okay, so now I’m not a stranger anymore.” He said, and giggled. “-Okay then. My name is Susan. Susan James Howard” the little girl said, and smiled at the little boy.




A lot of you seemed to really enjoy the story, and I know, it's cute, heartbreaking and romantic. Probably lots of other stuff as well, but I just wanted you guys to know that I am extremely happy about you guys writing all these really amazing comments! I get really touched when people tell me I've done a good work or that I am a good writer, because I love writing new stories! Especially when I know people are actually reading them and enjoying them! 


Anyway, some of you commented if there's and update for this, and I am sorry about there's not being one. I can make a new, but very short, story thing ish like this if you want to? Maybe with another boy. What do you think? Let me know in the comments:)


Lots of love

Laura xx

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