In Between the Love of Two

First Fanfic Hope you guys like it.
I don't know what it's about myself. I have an idea as to what it is but I change mind while I write so I won't write a summary til I finish it. Sorry. :) Enjoy!! xx Also I would also like to read your opinions so comment. It would help me so much thank you again! :)


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8. Deep, Dark, Mesmerizing

Liam's POV

I waited 30 minutes in line. After the girl in front of me gave her ticket, she got into the capsule. The man ushered me inside. I thought I was going into the next one. 

As I stepped inside, I realized it was just me and the girl. I don't think she noticed I was inside. The ride started to move. I noticed something on the girl's face that brought me happiness. It was a smile. I seriously don't know why it brought me such joy. Wow! She had a beautiful smile.

Once we got to the top, the sun started to set on the horizon. The girl took out her camera and took pictures. "What a beautiful scene." I said admiring the sunset. I think I startled her because she jumped at the sound of my voice.

She slowly, and I do mean SLOWLY, started to turn around. When she was fully around, the ride stopped and shook making a sound. At that moment, she started to fall. I couldn't let her, knowing I could do something about it. Just before her face met the floor, I caught her. There was something about me holding her that felt just right. 

She stood back on her feet. She looked up and met my eyes. It's like the whole world stopped. I couldn't see anything on the outside. It was just me and her, no one and nothing else. 

It was kind of awkward because we just stared at each other. I don't know if she was okay or not so I asked, "Excuse me miss, are you alright?"

She replied, "Y-yyes...I'm sorry. I'm a bit clumsy. You kind of shocked me. I thought I was alone..." her voice trailed off. 

"Oh. I'm the one who should be sorry. I didn't mean to give you a fright. It seems the ride is in a bit of a jam." I said. "My name is Liam, Liam Payne by the way." I gave her a hesitant smile. I can never be too cautious. She could be a crazy one. 

She smiled with beautiful and illuminating smile. So far she didn’t seem crazy. Does she know who I am?  Goodness! I don't know what it is about her, but that smile warms my heart. It's beautiful. She's beautiful. "My name is Angie." sticking out her hand, I shook it.

At the touch of her hand, these electrifying sensations went through my entire body. She had very soft hands and warm as well. I just wanted to hold her hand. Snap out of it Liam!

She still hasn't noticed who you are. Is it possible that she doesn't know who I am? Impossible. My face along with Niall, Zayn, Harry and Louis's faces are plastered all over the city. 

I noticed she had glasses, but that's not what caught my attention. She had the darkest eyes I've ever seen. Her eyes were brown. No...they were black! I don't even know myself. They seemed to get lighter in the sun's light but darker when no light hit them. I could look into those deep, dark, mesmerizing eyes all day. What's going on? Liam...?

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