Torn

Minnie is 17. She has blond hair that was bleached and is slowly going back to dark dark brown. She has wonderful green eyes. She loves everything. Except for One Direction. They are jerkfaces who are so full of themselves, she hates it. When she meets 5 boys her life and opinions are turned around, despite her looks that she hates.

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12. I love you...

Minnie's POV

I collapse on the floor next to Louis, and Niall stays back.

"Louis, what's wrong!?" I ask him.

"Can we talk in private...?" he manages to say bewteen sobs.

"Sure," I say and we get up and walk into the kitchen and Niall goes home to give us privacy. I sit on the kitchen table and cross my legs and Louis lays down with his head in my lap.

"So, what's bugging you?" I ask. Tears stream out of his eyes. He looks up at me and directly into my eyes.

"I don't know, it's just.. I, kinda, sorta.." he starts, then breaks down sobbing.

"Please tell me Louis!" I beg. His eyes meet mine. His eyes are a gray colour, it looks like someone put the ocean in his eye colour, they are beautiful. I tried to read his eyes, all I get is sadness.

"Uhm.. I, you see, erm..." he breaks down again.

"WHAT!? PLEASE TELL ME LOUIS!!" I yell, begging and pleading.

"You won't want to know," he says.

"Try me," I say.

"Okay.. I love you," is all he says.

"Yeah, I know that, I love you too," I say, confused.

"No no no, not like a sister.. Like a.. gmirflthforiwenlsd" he talks jibber at the last part.

"A what?" I ask.

"A..." I didn't hear the last part he said it so quietly.

Louis POV

"A what?" she asks.

"A girlfriend," I whisper super quietly.

"A what!?" she asks, "I can't hear you!" she says. Good, she can't hear me. That's what I was going for.

"A girlfriend," I say clearly and loudly and run out of the room. I run into the bathroom and lock the door and start to cry. I bet I just completely ruined our friendship, everything we ever had. There is a soft knock at the door.

"Louis, can I come in?" asks Minnie, in a soft voice.

"Mhm.." I sob. She opens the door and looks down at me. I am sitting on the floor looking like an immature little kid. She is so beautiful.. I hadn't loved her like that, but when she walked out that door to go find Niall, I realised I'm in love like I never have been before. When she kissed me during truth or dare, that was the most heavenly millisecond of my entire life.. She sits down across from me.

"I'm sorry, I should probably leave and never return, I'll never talk to you again, I don't know why I told you that, I bet you hate me, you're so happy with Niall.." I mumble.

"No Louis. If you weren't in my life, I wouldn't have anything. I could never hate you," she says meaningfully. I could just kiss her soft lips, I could stay with her forever.

"I''ll try to stay away though, after that I'm surprised you came to talk to me, I ruined our friendship forever.." I sob.

"Louis, we never had a friendship," she says. Those six words cut into my heart, I can't believe she said that. Why would she keep me around that whole time when I meant nothing to her? I start crying like crazy. I stand up and run out of the room and into a closet. I hide there.

Minnie's POV

"Because I love you too.." I mumble. He ran away before I could finish. I sigh, and stand up. When he said he loves me as a girlfriend, I was honestly quite happy. I mean of course I love Niall, but I also love Louis. When he was there for me when nobody else was, I love him. But Niall just did all of that, so I don't know who to be with! Niall broke my heart, Louis mended it, Niall took it. Niall broke my heart, Louis mended it, Niall took it. Louis had also stolen my heart this whole time. I walk into my room, he's not there. Kitchen? Living room? Nope. Closet? Yep. I climb in with him and turn on a flashlight.

"You didn't let me finish," I say.

"You didn't need to, I knew where you were going, you were gonna kick me out.." he mumbles sobbing harder.

"No, never! I was trying to say that what we had was more than a friendship. I love you, Louis. Every time Niall broke my heart, you would fix it and Niall would take my heart, while the whole time, you were the one I should be with. But I also love Niall, so I don't know what to think!" I say. My eyes meet Louis', and he isn't crying.

"Y-You love me..?" he asks.

"Yes, of course!" I say. Louis and I are still looking directly into eachothers eyes. I find myself lost in his eyes, and then without thinking I am slowly leaning in.

Louis' POV

I am immediately lost in her eyes. She starts leaning in, so do I. Our foreheads meet, still looking directly into eachothers eyes. Our lips meet. I pull her into my lap and she wraps her arms around my neck. I put my hands on her waist. She has me pinned to the wall. After probably 20 minutes of passionate kissing, she pulls away.

"I love you," she whispers.

"I love you too," I whisper. We walk into the living room and sit on the couch. We just stare deeply into eachothers' eyes. I decide to sing to her, a song I really like, Chasing Cars. We sang it on the xfactor, and I always just sing the parts we sang. We lay down on the couch and I start singing.

"We'll do it all, Everything, On our own. We don't need, anything, or anyone. If I lay here, If I just lay here, Would you lie with me and, just forget the world? Let's waste time, chasing cars, around our heads. If I lay here, if I just lay here, would you lie with me and, just forget the world? Forget what we're told, before I get too old, show me a garden that's bursting into life. Let's waste time, chasing cars, around our heads," I finish.

"I love that song," she says.

"Me too," I agree.

"I declare that our song," she says. I agree.

"I love you," she says.

"I love you too," I smile and kiss her cheek. We sit up and Niall walks in.

"Everything better? Great! I missed you babe," Niall says kissing Minnie on the cheek.

"Missed you too, but I need to talk to you.." she says to him. They walk into the bedroom and it hits me. She's going to break up with him for me..

When they come back, they're both fine.

"What happened?" I asked.

"We are no longer dating, but Niall told me he wasn't really ready to get into a serious relationship so it's not too hard, we're just friends.." Minnie says, and Niall smiles and nods.

"So if Minnie were to date another band member..?" I ask.

"I guess it'd be fine, if it was you.." Niall says.

"Can I?" I ask excitedly.

"Sure.." Niall says, "Just no pda around me.." he chuckles.

"Minnie? Will you be my girlfriend?" I ask.

"I'd be delighted to," Minnie smiles.

"Congratulations!" Niall smiles. I can't believe he's taking this well.. I pull him aside.

"Are you sure?" I ask him.

"Of course not, mate! I heard you singing and the whole 'our song' and 'Love you' and I didn't want to make her feel bad!" Niall cries into my shoulder.

"I don't have to date her, mate," I say.

"No, she's better for you, I'll get over her.." he says.

"I'm gonna go the club and meet a girl," Niall says. I give him another hug and he leaves, saying bye to Minnie. I decide not to tell her about Niall. She kisses me quickly and then we watch 'Love Actually'.  She cuddles up to me and falls asleep in my arms. Eventually I fall asleep too.

 

[A/N:] *I am just warning you that there will only be a few chapters left, and then I might not do a sequel anymore, but I will do an epilogue. Okay? I will do another chapter, then a 2 years later, then epilogue. It does get quite sad at the end, so I warn you, you may cry.. I apologise if you do.. So yeah, hope you enjoy it! Thanks :)*

 

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