Dreams do come true.

Two girls Pose as maids in the hotel which One direction is staying at.
Kaitlynn Marie Thomas, goes to visit her best friend Elliza (Liza) Jones who lives in London as she does every summer, but this time will be different for more than one reason:
1. This time Kaitlynn will be traveling on the plane by herself instead of with her mum as she usually did
2. Liza has her own apartment that she started renting two months ago that is right next to One Directions hotel.
3. As they get close to 1D will two boys fight over one girl? or three?
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24. Excessive Comments Lead To No Good

Liza's P.O.V

"Well he's my friend now." Kaitlynn answers boldly now looking me straight in the eyes as she rips from my grasp and leaves the room. Why does she have to be so dramatic? I'm only trying to sort it out so she doesn't hurt anyone. Especially herself. I take a deep breath then leave the kitchen. Niall looks up at me from the couch sending me a hopeful smile. I let out a deep breath as I take my spot on the couch next to him, laying my head on his shoulder. He drapes his arm around my shoulder. 

"Do you wanna spend the night here tonight?" Niall asks as he moves some hair out of my face. I smile.

"Why, Do you want me to?" I ask him innocently. He chuckles and meets my stare.

"Well of course I do." he says weakly then kisses me on the forehead. I blush.

"Can I ask you a question? One that has been bugging me for a while now?" I ask him eagerly. 

"Anything babe." he answers getting more serious with a sort of worried look on his face. I sit up strait and look him in the eyes. 

"Why me? I mean your Niall Horan of One Direction, you could date super models. Why me?" I ask him as more eagerness fills my voice. 

"W-well," He stutters. "Why wouldn't I?" he asks kindly as he leans his head closer to mine. I pull away a bit, determined I will find an answer to my troubling question that has filled my head.

"I'm just a boring fan, I can't sing, or even carry a note, although I have memorized every word to every song by One Direction. I'm the kind of girl that gets in huge Internet fights defending you guys against your low life haters. The kind of person that would screech and jump up and down if you followed me on twitter. The person that counts down the days until your next album comes out.  I get OCD against stickiness or smelly clothes. I wear prescription glasses. I never told you that but I do. I'm a nerd. One time I got a B- on one of my tests in high school, it was one of the lowest grades i have EVER got, and literally cried to the teacher because she wouldn't let me make it up. I never turn work in late. I find pyjamas comfy and sometimes just don't change out of them all day unless I have something that involves me leaving my apartment. I slurp my soup. I have bad posture. I eat way more than I should, I'm surprised I'm not 300 pounds. I judge people if they are rude to me or my friends. It takes me like a half an hour to take a shower. I want kids, like four, plus some adopted. I like to pop my knuckles, and if you haven't noticed, I have HUGE hands for a girl. I -" I keep rambling but finally get interrupted by Niall smashing his lips against mine. Probably just to tell me to shut the hell up. When he pulls away he answers my question.

"Because I haven't heard or seen anything to get my mind off you." 

"Even after I told you all that? Are you crazy?" I ask him with a blush.

"All those details about you made me so much more crazy about you Liza. You must be crazy, for thinking that you aren't every guys dream girl." he hugs me. "I mean you became my maid for a reason, it's not just because you chose this job by chance, you went through everything and just happened to have a job at the hotel to which I am staying at? It was destiny." he pulls back then kisses me.

I feel sick. Not by chance Niall, we're not really maids, Kaitlynn and me both lied to you and everyone. Why can't I just tell him that? Because he would never trust you ever again Liza. Nice going you idiot. 

"So are you wearing contacts?" he asks me.

"Ya, I put 'em in right after Louis gave me the breakfast and I set it on the table." I take my contact and move it around my eye. Niall gives me a face as if he is revolted then let's out a chuckle. I giggle along with him. 

"You should wear your glasses tomorrow Liza, i bet you'd look even more gorgeous in them, and i dont even know if that is possible." Niall suggests with a warm smile. 

"Okay, If you want me to. Smile for me Niall!" I demand cheerfully. Niall gives me a cheeky grin showing off his braces. "You shouldn't have gotten braces babe, I liked 'em better before." I say gently as I cup his cheek with my hand. He lets out a small chuckle.

"My mom and management seemed to disagree." he says as he smiles, lets out a sigh and looks at his knees. 

"Your teeth were awesome, I loved how one crossed the other it was absolutely adorable! Kaitlynn agrees, we've talked about the subject before." I say with a bright smile. He looks back up at me with a cheerful smile.

"Well I should have kept it eh?" he says then kisses me lightly. 

"What do you think Kaitlynn and Harry are doing?" Niall asks as we pull away. I shrug my shoulders and stand up. Niall stands up and we walk to Harry's room. We open the door quietly to see Harry and Kait cuddling, fast asleep.

"Awe!" I whisper happily. I walk over to the bed and take a picture of them with my phone. They look perfect together. Niall comes to my side and kisses me on the cheek.

"They are so cute, I swear I don't think I have ever seen Harry this happy with a girl." Niall says admiring the expressions on their unconscious faces. Harry is spooning Kaitlynn and Kait is holding his right hand with her left. They couldn't look more comfortable. We leave the room and I suggest we go hang out with someone so we go into Louis room. When we walk in his room he immediately looks up from his laptop when a smile appears on his face.

"Oh look, it's the happy couple!" He exclaims as he slides the laptop off his stomach and sits up. 

"Hey Lou!" Niall says happily at my side. Louis nods His head at Niall.

"Nialler." he greets him. Then nods his head at me. "Elliza." he greets me. I giggle and sit next to him. 

"So. . . Whatcha doin?" I nosily ask him. He gives me a cheeky grin. 

"On twittah" He says instead of 'Twitter' 

"Oh Lou that reminds me, you should follow Liza, it'll make her screech and Jump up and down!" Niall suggests. He was actually listening to me when I said all that stuff? Awe!!! I bounce my knees up and down, excited. 

"What's your account name?" Louis asks me with a smile.

"Capitol Liza underscore capitol Jones." I smile back. He looks through his followers. 

"Oh there you are! I knew you'd be followin me Liza!" he says full of himself I smile and roll my eyes. "Done! You are now being followed by Mr. Louis Tomlinson." he adds. I smile. My phone beeps. I look at it and it just notifies my that Louis is following me. I let out a little squeal and louis and Niall chuckle at me. Louis returns to his laptop and fiddles with the keyboard. My phone beeps again and tells me that Louis tagged me in his tweet that quotes:

'Just sitting in my room with Niall and @Liza_Jones we've been having a super fun past few days, because she is a total awesome girl. Give her a follow? I'm sure she will follow you back! See ya! xx' I giggle then lightly punch Louis in the bicep. 

"Louis! Now people are going to be jealous and hate on me!" I exclaim getting worried. I don't need the attention. 

"Haha no they are not, look at the comments!" He says in defense as he turns the laptop so it is facing me. I read them. The first one says:

'Awwe, she's so pretty! You guys would be cute together! xxx'  that one makes me smile. The second one reads:

'^^^ I agree but What about Eleanor?' I furrow my eyebrows together I scroll through some. Another reads:

'She might be dating Niall! Im jealous but how cute!(:' another one catches my eye because it swears. it reads:

'I wouldn't be surprised if she is dating both Niall and Louis because her friend is a cheating bitch too. Don't hurt my boys or I'll fucking cut you whores.' right under is a link. I clasp my hand over my mouth. That was pretty flippen excessive don't you think miss pissy? I click on the link and and let a horrible gasp leave my mouth. 

"Oh no, Kaitlynn!" I say weakly. 

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