The Prince Of Peace

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  • Published: 21 Jun 2012
  • Updated: 29 Jun 2012
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A change in her room causes
Hannah to take a step and go
on an adventure. Missing the bus
might be bad but for her its an
amazing mistake...

(I wrote this at the age of 9)


5. The Judgements

Eventually it was my turn to be judged.


The Judge was shining as if he himself were a sun. He picked up some books with my name on, put them at my feet and set them alight. A second later there was nothing - just an empty space where the books had once been. I stood there amazed, when he spoke:

"Hannah - Come you who are blessed by my father, come take your inheritance, the kingdom prepared for you since the creation of the earth."

Almost immediately an Angel appeared out of nowhere and took me to a shining tunnel, I stopped and asked:

"Can we stay here and watch the next judgement?"

He agreed to it.


The next one was a man with very good principles.

"Away from me I never knew you"

"But, er... I followed the way of God and..."

There was a shriek as he was led off but I daren't think where he was going...

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