• edvin damien

    mumbled "Critique or just please read it and tell me what you think?"

    há 2 anos atrásResponder
    If anyone could critique my piece that would be wonderful, or even just read it and tell me what you think, what you expect would happen, what you'd like to happen, etc., etc. It is waiting for a review at an on hiatus review store right now, but as I'd like to write more, if anyone can offer anything, I'd be very pleased.
    Party at the End of the UniverseTwo teens who realise that a billboard at bus stops in north London for adverts have been going up for a widow service they say for the one that left us...


    Thank you