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  • Ray Lidstone

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    1 months agoReply
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    Between StarsJaz lives in a world split in two. The stunningly beautiful, wealthy and cunning Modified to one side and the lesser Unaltered—the people like her—to the...

    I was wondering if anyone would like to exchange constructive criticism? I recently offered to let one of my teachers read the first chapter of Between Stars, and I need someone to look it over and point out any obvious mistakes. I’d definitely love to do the same in exchange!
    Lily Anna
    1 months ago
    Sure, I would :) Do you just want feedback on the first chapter?