• Alviss Brown

    mumbled "New Version of The Poison Garden"

    1 months agoReply
    Hey, everyone!
    I'm okay!
    I was going to keep the new version of The Poison Garden that I'm writing to myself for now (I know I didn't finish the first version but something about it just didn't feel right to me), but I am not sure how I feel about it, it is largely unedited and I am hungry for feedback.
    So if anyone is up for a quick (?) read - there's not a lot of it, and it's almost all shoved together in one chunk. (It's titled 'Wormwood (The Poison Garden)')

    I welcome (crave) feedback!
    (Also, if this post comes across kind of weird - I am third year university student and I am very tired. So very tired.)