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  • enova

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    3 years agoReply

    I am rubbish at writing the blurb for the "back of the book" or the "BoB". After many, many rewrites I have come up with this for my book "Tenderfoot", being published this spring. Am I close here? Would you pick up this book and at least take a peek at the first chapter after reading this? I'm really in the dark here...help! Oh, and the attached image is just a mock-up cover. The "real one" will be similar, but more polished!

    "There's nothing to see. No lights, no sound. But my skin knows this isn’t home."

    Teenagers, Linnea, Sammy, Logan, and Daisy, have stumbled into a tear in the fabric between worlds. Crossing over to a place called Enova, they leave behind lives of poverty, violence, and despair, and receive a fresh start. Adopted by loving families, they begin to settle in, and accept their new home, but an assassination attempt on their lives changes everything. The four strangers must band together, and accept help from unlikely partners, if they are to survive.

    "The first step was mine; then I was rescued. And I’m relieved, I was desperate for a way out."
    Pokemon Panda
    3 years ago
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    im so gonna read this! it sounds amazing!!!
    u did great with the "BoB", as u call it
    enova
    3 years ago
    Thank you Girl of Frye!
    Pokemon Panda
    3 years ago
    um, its not frye, like french fries. its actually spelled fyre, like fire

    but anyways yur welcome!
    enova
    3 years ago
    Oh! Sorry. Fyre, I like that!
    Pokemon Panda
    3 years ago
    its kk. a few others have made da same mistake X3