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My Movellas (2)
The white Horse
473835 May 12I galloped far away from my parents mansion. My friend Pip was on a stallion right behind me, we had to get as far away from... Read more

Chloe's Book Of Survival
2804728 Apr 12Chloe has always wanted to get out of her small village school, she finally has the chance. When she put her first step into... Read more
My Mumbles (2)

What who why
panda123I was walking down a lane when Ivy (my friend screamed) I looked to see
if she was there, but all I could see where three arrows one pointing North, one pointing South another pointing to East but no west. It was like Ivy went West but who took her, what do they want with her?- 1 years ago
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Why Oh Why
panda123My mum has driven me nuts!!! The only thing I can think of is how much I want a phone
Anyway please be 1 of my fans- 1 years ago
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geoffrey stuart
Hi, I have read both of you stories someone gave me some advice when I started out writing
SLOW down what you have in a paragraph can be expanded into several pages
You have good ideas, but you use them up to quickly the transition from start to finish is to fast
If I were you, I would rewrite them using the current shape as an outline.
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My Favourites (1)

If You Tell Anyone I'll Kill You
116710530424 Apr 12Unnamed and worthless, Girl is forced to stay hidden from the outside world while her cruel parents inflict pain and terror... Read more
