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Directioners<3Words, I'm not sure, could describe this piece of writing. Truly amazing. You have a gift.- 4 months ago
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DownFallSorry for the late reply! :( Im so happy you liked it, thank you for having the time to read my poem :)- 2 months ago
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JadeeLaurennWow, this is a really powerful piece of of writing. I love it!
If you have time, could you check out my Movella, "Surfaced"?
Keep writing! :D- 10 months ago
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DownFallThanks Jade for the insight, ill be sure to check your movella out :)- 10 months ago
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Unspoken Dreams. Very powerful, I really like this poem. It was beautifully written, it's a fantastic piece.
If you have time, could you read my piece "Stay Strong", I would appreciate it a lot. :)- 11 months ago
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DownFallSure thing Unspoken :) and thanks- 11 months ago
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DinakarBeautiful poem ,i liked it- 11 months ago
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DownFallthanks Dinakar- 11 months ago
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VioletRoseI loved the beginning the most! Mainly because it is more descriptive about what is going on and what she looks like! Liked. :')) umm at the end did she die?- 11 months ago
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DownFallThanks Violet, and about the girl she did die- 11 months ago
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