Demons run 2 the end
Blurb after alfie family moves to a new alfie sister touches a light but what going to happen now...
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- Alfiei need to edit this to make it look better
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This makes no sense. I don't understand it.
If someone speaks you need speech marks. You need to set a scene. The blurb doesn't go with the story. The picture may be full in your head but you need to put it in full on paper.
This sounds harsh but that's how it goes on Movellas. Can you read and give CC (Constructive Criticism) on Where to Meet please?