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Spring Murders

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lupus virgo & Diego<3
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    26 Jul 12
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Blurb I get called dumb,yeah I work in a caf'e for the supernatural but they are wrong,I'm clever and I think my BBF is not telling me something....
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Spring Murders

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Fight,thats one word that is not in my vocabulary,I've had to learn lots of things and I hate that word.It's a word that I can't seem to do or find.

 

I'm idiotic to think that I have a place among the supernatural but my friend knows something,something that he is not telling me.I don't what it is but it must be big.

 

Wait someone's coming,why am I so scared,mabye because....No,oh no,please not them,they're hear,they're for me,please lord let it be quick,please no,no "AARRGGGHHHH!!!"

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  • Danté Azrael OmbraspadaBefore the good, I'll point out a few bad things (just, don't hold them against me).
    A few missing spaces. I think there should be a full-stop after the first word.
    There are a couple of missing words I think: "I don't know what" "They're here for me"
    A few misspellings: "Maybe" "Here"
    But the good should hopefully outweigh those negatives.
    Already, I'm curious what's happening. Who are they? Who is this friend? What are they hiding?
    I'm drawn in, so please. Write some more. I'm fascinated, and drawn in - Danté
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