Angel

by
Agnes..
  • Published:
    14 Jul 12
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Blurb When you have lost all the persons you can trust. When the loss have changed your whole world and leaved you with a big black hole in your chest. When it has leaved you as another person. Then you find out how little life is worth.

Plot keywords:
sygdom,  mord,  sorg,  død,  kærlighed
Category:
Mystery & Suspense
Approx 8 minutes to read

Angel

1. Prologue

I was an angel. I had always been an angel. A sweet and beautiful angel, who was good at everything, and never did anything wrong. I was good at school, had many friends and a cute boyfriend, I was popular, helpful, and kind. I loved my family,  my friends, and my boyfriend, and I never let them down. I was the nice girl, who was loved by everyone.

That was the person I used to be. Now, thing are deferent. I´m not sweet, I’m not kind or helpful. I don’t have a family to love anymore. And I don’t have anybody, who can still call me there friend.

I´m not an angel anymore!

 

Comments (7)

  • Julia BlackDit engelsk er - som Køhler. siger - godt. Et enkelt råd: jeg føler, at det går lidt for hurtigt frem og kunne godt tænke mig lidt mere 'nutidshandling' i første kapitel. Men du har fanget sorgen rigtig godt, og prologen er super velskrevet og opbygger en masse spænding. Xoxo ^-^
    Agnes..Mange tak for rosen og det gode råd! Jeg vil kigge på det, men er ikke sikker på jeg vil ændre så meget mere:)
    Julia BlackDet var så lidt! Det vigtigste er også, at du stadig føler, at det er din historie. Xoxo:3
  • Køhler.Har læst lidt, og den lyder rigtig spændende og unik. Måske vil jeg få tid til at læse mere en dag.
    - du er super god til engelsk. :-)
    like herfra.
  • Jacque-LineRigtig god n_n det er faktisk lidt ærgeligt, at den er på dansk, men samtidig gør det den lidt unik, og speciel ^^' du er rigtig god til det der engelsk! :O Like fra mig n_n
    Agnes..Tusind tak! Det er dejligt at høre:)
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