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DinakarGood beginning,continue ,keep the suggestions of wagonwheels12 in mind- 1 years ago
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- wagonwheels12It sounds like a good start! :) But you need to use capital letters at the start of sentences and think carefully about punctuation. Keep on writing :)
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- pringlesim sorry if its crap im 10 years old and its my first time on movellas
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