The Transfer

by
Liv liv <3
  • Published:
    4 Jul 12
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Blurb Fourteen year old, Kathleen Roberts, finds herself forced to move away from her friends and most importantly her boyfriend, Aaron. Kat experiences quite a culture shock when she moves from sunny San Francisco to Hackney, London. Gareth, Kats' father, is delighted when his boss offers him a promotion, to a branch of the company, in London. But, in telling Kat the news, he finds out that she is not as impressed.

Plot keywords:
teenage romance,  gang culture,  drama
Category:
Romance
Approx 5 minutes to read

The Transfer

1. Preface

" I promise, I only love you!" I spoke down the phone. I am such a terrible liar- the way I spoke the words pleaded that they were true, so desperately, that anyone could tell that that it was a lie.

"Kat, I know there is someone else," Aaron said so calmly that it was as if he didn't care, "Look, I know we said that we would never break up and have a long-distance relationship, but it's not working. It's been six months now and I know you want to move on and that's fine with me- it's your decision."

"Okay fine,"Aaron's unselfishness made the guilt even more painful, "there is someone else, but I still love you, Aaron," I knew how it sounded but it was true.

"Well, you're going to have to choose one of us, Kat." 

 

Comments (5)

  • Liv liv <3Yeah I am still writing it, I'll be able to start writing quicker soon because it will be the holidays and i won't have school. And yeah I'll check out both of your books. :)
    Diego<3great new ch but I would leave out the 'To be continued' xD
    Liv liv <3Yeah I will- :( so annoyed, I just wrote the rest of that chapter and a bit of the next one and I've lost it all!!!!
  • Jas247wow,loved the main character, shes really easy to relate to but you need to right more... is she still with aaron? Who is the other person??????????? WRITE MORE! could you check out my book "the ghost" hx a lot, and seriously... WRITE MORE!
  • Diego<3oohh who will she choose I WANNA KNOW. MORE :D really great tension.
    If you have time can you check out 'Isle of bird' thanks :)
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