Bells HunterI've read the first few chapter and found very few mistakes. Good job! The only thing I would change is the dont. Comic Sanse MS is good in some cases but for writing a story I hesitate. Times new Roman or Arial, makes it look more profesinal. But that's just for the eyes - other than that I like it. Liked! Would you mind checking out my poem - Attempts of Poetry? :D Thanks!
Cookie MonsterOh ok. I'll see about another font. It's just I kind of had a bit of an obsession about it when I started to write this movella. Hehe. Thanks for commenting and likeing. I have already checked out your attempts of poetry I think but I will check. I also left a comment for you on your movella Blitz it was just an idea for you to continue it but from another characters point of view so if you want to take a look at that then be my guest! Hehe thanks again. Cookie Monster
QuillFeatherI've read the first few chapters of this and it's really good. Liked. I feel bad asking but could you check out my Movellas: A Day in the Life and Daydreams and Feathers especially. Thanks!
Fi xxxThis is good and you should write more. I feel abit cheeky asking, but could you please check out movella "Who ami?" and tell me what you think. Thanks :)
Would you mind checking out my poem - Attempts of Poetry? :D Thanks!