The Island

by
Cookie Monster
  • Published:
    4 Jul 12
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Blurb About an island and it's mysteries!!!
Plot keywords:
seagulls, island
Category:
Fantasy
Rating:
Approx 21 minutes to read


The Island

1. The Beginning

When the night is clear and the moon is bright you may be able to see the island. But it isn't any island. It's the island. And it has a tale to tell…
 

Comments (8)

  • Bells HunterI've read the first few chapter and found very few mistakes. Good job! The only thing I would change is the dont. Comic Sanse MS is good in some cases but for writing a story I hesitate. Times new Roman or Arial, makes it look more profesinal. But that's just for the eyes - other than that I like it. Liked!
    Would you mind checking out my poem - Attempts of Poetry? :D Thanks!
    Cookie MonsterOh ok. I'll see about another font. It's just I kind of had a bit of an obsession about it when I started to write this movella. Hehe. Thanks for commenting and likeing. I have already checked out your attempts of poetry I think but I will check. I also left a comment for you on your movella Blitz it was just an idea for you to continue it but from another characters point of view so if you want to take a look at that then be my guest! Hehe thanks again. Cookie Monster
  • QuillFeatherI've read the first few chapters of this and it's really good. Liked. I feel bad asking but could you check out my Movellas: A Day in the Life and Daydreams and Feathers especially. Thanks!
  • Tylar Jaydethis is good. you need to continue it for sure! it's wonderful. could you please check out mine, "The Summer I'd Never Forget."?
  • Fi xxxThis is good and you should write more. I feel abit cheeky asking, but could you please check out movella "Who ami?" and tell me what you think. Thanks :)
    Cookie MonsterI have read it. And I think I've commented!
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