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The Blackout

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J.M Greenwood
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  • Published:
    3 Jul 12
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Blurb In there they where waiting, waiting for that one signel...
Plot keywords:
mystery
Category:
Mystery & Suspense
Rating:
Approx 3 minutes to read


The Blackout

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1. The blackout- 3th June 2014

The blackout

 

In there they were waiting, waiting for the signal that one word then... blackness and it will begin.

 

3th June 2014

The police had warnings written on parchment, “9:00- The Gherkin”, was written on it. It was sent on the 31st May and since then high security had been around the gherkin but nothing had happened, the police had worries on why the anonymous person would tell them the location and time of whatever they were planning so have closed the gherkin until further notice. This was spoiling Helena Bonham Carter’s celebrity fancy dress party plans as it was being held at the Gherkin on the 7th of June but was allowed to keep it going as long the security was allowed to be there.

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  • bookoholicthis is really good!
    J.M GreenwoodThank you! :D
  • KathrynThis is really good! This defiantly deserves more views! :D Could you check out my movellas "Slim Pickings"? Thank you :D
  • DenleyThis is really good. Your story deserves to be noticed. You have used really good vocabulary with few mistakes so well done. Deserves more veiws. :) Please can you check out my story 'Underneath The Costume?'
    J.M GreenwoodThank you :D and I will
  • KaisumiI love how you were narrating your story. However, the storyline felt a bit choppy as I was wondering how you jumped from one topic or time frame to the next without having anything to lead it into the next portion of your story. Have you thought about using a paragraph at the end of each section that purposely builds the reader up to the next step of your story? I think this would work much better for you. There are some grammatical errors in there that you might want to correct. Even I do that and it is so helpful for me when someone points them out. Sometimes I get in the groove of typing out my thoughts and my thoughts move faster than my fingers upon the keyboard. I think your story is interesting. Thanks for sharing!
    KaisumiAhh see there I go with my brain and fingers not working well again while trying to explain that point to you. Go figure! *laughs at herself*
    J.M Greenwoodhaha, thanks for the comments i will try to change them. no problem :)
  • Diego<3wow. I seriously think this this is great and deserves more views. it's quite a unique idea but I would keep the font the same as the font varies and the last chapters font is different type. And in chapter 3 I think the list after he opened the door was too long. We get the general idea with a few less :D but this is really great, description great and really wanting more ;D
    If you have time could you check out 'Isle of bird' thanks :)
    J.M Greenwoodthank you for your comments, i will try and tweak those. i will check out your story :D
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