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Sometimes i wonder... why me....

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Kieva Rising
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  • Published:
    29 Jun 12
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Blurb 15 year old Paris Jordan, is bullied. No-one understand what she's going through. The bullies think they are cool to bully Paris, but their wrong. But one of the bullies gang members turns out to like her and really wants to help her out. Will it be the end of the road for her or the bullies?
Plot keywords:
member, of, bullying, paris, comp entry, fifteen, 15, gang, road, the, end
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Approx 15 minutes to read


Sometimes i wonder... why me....

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1. Prolouge~ Bullying quotes for those being bullied...

It is our choices ... that show what we truly are, far more than our abilities. - J. K. Rowling (Harry Potter and The Chamber of Secrets)

 

 

Live and let live. - Anonymous

 

 

You can search throughout the entire universe for someone who is more deserving of your love and affection than you are yourself, and that person is not to be found anywhere. You yourself, as much as anybody in the entire universe deserve your love and affection. - The Buddha  

 

 

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  • MeMyselforeverWill there be more :)?
    Kieva RisingProbably, I might make a longer version. I'll see :)
  • AwkwardTurtleXDIt's good, but the one thing I didn't like was that you were kinda prejudice about Emo's. I know a few of them, and I used to one, its kinda offensive. But I really loved the strong sense in Paris' character! :D
    Kieva RisingSorry. I didn't mean to stereotype. I mean, I used to be an Emo so I know what she would kinda look like. I mean, this is how I used to act. I forgot to put into the story, though, that she turns away from Emo-isim to become a tomboy.............. bad mistake.................
    AwkwardTurtleXDI wasn't trying to cause an argument :/ but if you were an emo then you would hate stereotypes as much as I do :P
    Kieva RisingI know you weren't. I had to delete Declan P's comment because that wasn't the reason I was an Emo. I just was unhappy half the time and felt like my life was dead. Not that that's what an Emo thinks. Thats just what I think. I gave up though :). Yeah, I also hate stereotypes. BTW, you write amazing stories.
    AwkwardTurtleXDThanks :) I didn't mean to be horrible or anything :/
  • ♥MiaFlora♥Nice really good would u mind liking and favouriting my story WOW:Blood Elves Power i will return the favour.
    ♥MiaFlora♥But would you please
    Kieva RisingI read it, commented, liked and Favourited. :) it interested me once I started to read it. Lovely
    Diego<3I'm not calling you one Kieva Rising. some people just copy and paste the same comment and it gets on my nerves...
    Kieva RisingOh right..... I know :). It really does annoy people. btw, loving your stories Lia! I really love reasons I hope you continue :)
  • QuillFeatherReally good so far. A few spelling errors and typos (outside of the letters of course). You also need to think about how the character describes herself. In life, we usually focus on the negative of our appearance. Instead of telling us how beautiful she is, get the narrator to complain about what she dislikes about her appearance. Maybe she has freckles, spots or slightly out of place teeth. Apart from that really enjoying it and look forward to hearing more. Liked!
    Kieva RisingThanks :). She explains herself so you think she likes her apperance, but once she starts to break down because of the bulling, she tells you all the things she hates about herself. Sorry for the spelling errors =^-^=
    QuillFeatherMaybe you could have said at the start something along the lines of 'I've never been insecure about my appearance. I don't mind but I'm not in love with myself either'. Just a little something to nudge the reader in the right direction!
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